Demon lord: Latex demon P21-25

Incredible! Masterpiece!

Format: Original quote ↴ Modified quote with [notes] ↴ Modified quote without notes. Notes shown in [square brackets] Multiple possible modifications shown in {curly brackets / braces} ―――――――――― [Page 21] "This is your doing isn't it, creature!? I...I would never do anything shameful such as this!" ↴ “This is your doing, isn’t it, creature!? I…I would never do anything as shameful as this!” "Oh my my, I may give yor a demon body but all of those fun action you did earlier. It's was all your my dear." ↴ “My, my. I may have given you [Past tense] a demon body, but all that fun action you did earlier? That was all you, my dear.” ↴ “My, my. I may have given you a demon body, but all that fun action you did earlier? That was all you, my dear.” "What if I told you." ↴ “What if I told you…” "What you had just eaten was but a fraction of that human energy. After all most of it came to me." ↴ “…What you had just eaten was but a fraction of that human’s energy. After all, most of it went to me.” "Do like it, dear? This is a full magical energy distilled from that human." ↴ “Do you like it, dear? That is [‘energy’ is uncountable; no ‘a’] pure [‘full’ doesn’t seem right here] magical energy, distilled from that human.” ↴ “Do you like it, dear? That is pure magical energy, distilled from that human.” "Cooked and inject direcly into your lovely mana body. A night and day from that's bland raw energy doesn't it?" ↴ “Cooked and injected [Past tense] directly into your lovely mana body. Night and day [‘night and day’ is uncountable] from that bland raw energy, isn’t it?” ↴ “Cooked and injected directly into your lovely mana body. Night and day from that bland raw energy, isn’t it?” [Page 22] "Ah,ah, stop! If any more waves coming I...I..." ↴ “Ah, ah, stop! If there are any more waves coming, I…I…” "My body are being pump full of this delicious energy"↴ “My body is being pumped full of this delicious energy.” "Ekk! I can feel my expanding mana body push again my leather shell!" ↴ “Eek! I can feel my mana body expanding, [Shift verb to make the sentence read better] pushing against my leather skin [‘shell’ is odd choice of words. ‘skin’ feels like it’d fit better]!” ↴ “Eek! I can feel my mana body expanding, pushing against my leather skin!” "No more! If I keep experience this. I...I won't be able to go back being a man." ↴ “No more! If I keep experiencing this, I…I won’t be able to go back to being a man.” [Page 23] "After experience a true demon ecstasy." ↴ “After experiencing a true demon ecstasy…” "How can I go back being "that"?"↴ “…How can I go back to being “that”?” [Page 25] "These lovely knight's hearts are belong to me now." ↴ “These lovely knights’ [Apostrophes are strange. In this case, you wanted the plural (the knights) possessive (belonging to them); because ‘knights’ already ends in an ‘s’, the apostrophe is not followed by another ‘s’. So, ‘knights’’.]” hearts belong to me now.” ↴ “These lovely knights’ hearts belong to me now.”

I was looking forward to the update!

Ih this is beautiful, the final look, the design and the details, definately one of your best works

God Fang turned out so amazing and hot ^^