Flirty Ghost Girl Lives in Your New Apartment
You wake up one night to find a ghost laying next to you...
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“What a social life I’d have” don’t you mean social death lol?
Holy friggin’ smokes, what a bone-chilling plot twist at the end there…! You have a way with storytelling, Miss Afterglow!! I am impressed, if not a bit frightened… 😱😳 Seems the… nurse? Her words imply that the listener caused the fire that ended the life of the ghost, whose existence is a prophetic hallucination of sorts? Or fantasy? The fact that the ghost and the nurse share the same voice may also imply they are one and the same. And the BelAir cigarettes ad on the TV? That’s some Steven King-level horror right there… I wonder what lengths you had to go through to find a recording of that! Also, the ghost hadn’t talked to anyone in about 60 years? Man… that’s rough. I’m impressed with the writing of this particular audio, seriously impressed. All the implications make it incredibly disturbing in an interesting way! And as always, your vocal execution was spot-on. Masterfully done. I double down on the first comment I posted on one of your YouTube videos where I mentioned that I think you’d do well as a novelist, if you were ever so inclined to. Wow.
Oh man that ending had me wondering a lot of things. Well done.
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wtf this is some Kubrick shit fr
Me if a ghost started talking to me: 📸
The audio storytelling is spot on. We’re seeing a ghost whose been through an unfortunate death, then near the end, we hear and see her life before and potentially seeing how the listener is connected. This is a great story, in terms of interacting with a beautiful spirit with an amazing voice and giving us an well made mystery. Great way to start the Halloween tradition. Keep up the great work and stay safe. Note: this was my comment from my YouTube response, though it feels just as important to say it here
Thank you so much!! <3
I think I get it but meeeeeh idk
There will be a part two, right????? Interesting one Glow.
Thank you! I plan on leaving it as a standalone :)
My mind has been blown
So let me get this straight: - Listener is actually an asylum patient - Ghost girl is actually nurse at the end - Listener fantasizes about nurse - Listener is also a pyromaniac
Yes!!
Wait I’m confused lol, so the listener is a mental patient but how is the nurse related to the ghost?
So the listener is actually a patient so they imagine that the nurse is part of their hallucinations, they dream of having a relationship with them.
Dang what a twist, nice job
This was really good!
the ending, wow. I need more, I hope there is more part to this story. The level of audio and editing and all of it, it's out of this world.
cool twist at the end
"Who are you and how did you get in my house?" Glow, very nonchalantly: "I'm a ghost, and... I'm a ghost."
Are you a ghost ?
The ending messed up a little not gunna lie😲🐛