9.60
Let's begin again. Thank you for your patience. I've finished a chapter and I hope you enjoy. (30,400 Words)
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“Good speeches are made of regrets.”
Dead gods I love this story
thank you for the chapter!
It had some good parts in it, chapters that doesn't move forward and just focus on build up are hard, they all feel short since not much happens in terms of time in the story.
This is like the buildup towards the climax of Volume 5 times ten. And I am afraid that even more beloved characters will die this time then back then.
My body is soo ready. My mind ain’t, but the old electric meatball will have to deal.
I was hoping she’d use her theater to show her memories from the land of the dead. It might be a memetic threat to do so, but it’d get the point across viscerally. But then maybe it could be a bit too much for them to see their heroes and ancestors get gobbled up like skittles at fat camp
"You all know I've been dead. You all know the curse dead gods. They're not. They're coming for us."
Welcome back and lets go! <3
Mrsha made me cry hard Thanks for chapter!
We need werewolves. Just because your average person's heard of werewolves doesn't mean they don't exist. The average person hasn't heard of angelum either.
I'm not sure what by what criteria the Orjin arc was a failure to you, but I enjoyed every bit of it and the ending felt like a payoff to everything that came before. So if that's the bar, I will end up loving the solstice arc and this felt like a solid start. Good luck and happy writing.
I actually would agree with pirateaba and say it wasn't that great of an ending — the whole idea of the elements didn't weigh correctly with the whole arc of Orjin's development. He should have developed some level of "complete martial art", which included not just fighting but creation and preservation of life (which were his previous qualms with martial arts). He also should have grown from knowing Salii and learned to wield not just his fists but the entire nation, their philosophy, etc. — a philosophy that acts on multiple metaphysical levels
Nice. The buildup to the Solstice is real. Better change into my brown pants.
Yes!
Meh.
Begone, ragamuffin.
Just when I was heading for bed... EVIL!
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