9.46 S
Okay, hear me out. I know. I know. I'm taking today and Sunday off. But I did it in one sitting. Which makes it better...? You can't organize writing like a timetable. But I am going to take the rest of my weekend. Now, you read this. It's craaazy stuff. (21,500 Words)
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Look forward to listening to this when it comes to audible. I bet the section in cat language is going to be a laugh when recording 😹
Pitateaba, have you thought about making a chapter for Ama the [Necromancer], she just met Erin and her crazy inn. I’m sure her emotions and thoughts are going crazy. I’d love to see her journey before and after meeting Erin. She lost her apprentice didn’t see? How was her emotional state? How about afterwards, how is she dealing being a [Necromancer] in the open, what are her thoughts on Erin, her new class and etc. I really want to see more chapter about her
I would also say that she’s underestimating Earths ability to respond in kind to plagues… it’s not like innworld rocked their yellow rivers handling. Also, it should be noted that just about every overpowered spell we’ve seen deployed is ACTUALLY relatively localized in effect, safely deployable in innworld and limited in use only because they are relics/hard to reproduce….. Earth doesn’t deploy WMDs because we are existentially worried that too many will go off and we’ll render our planet unlivable.
I’m really hoping that Earth isn’t gonna just get absolutely rolled if there is a big conflict. Like I’m hoping that while Silvenia got the shaman earth technology knowledge and stuff, it turns out Earth has actually gone full Golden Age of Technology and now got space marines and even BETTER guns.
i wouldn't like to see them meet at all but it would be nice to see more magitech from black mage i started rereading and i felt like the unwillingness to share tech was way over the top in vol. 1
Catboys in 2024. Truly the West has fallen.
Thanks for the crack!
Pirateaba, the reason why I wish for a similar character to Madara is because I was hoping for more, how you introduced the “Demons,” it was a little dull. I love your work, I’ve laughed, I’ve cried, you’ve even frightened me while reading your story. But the “Demons”, yea they are legends, you gave them a shock factor while introducing them. But they won’t make me cry, they haven’t hit my heart. Maybe their moment hasn’t come yet, I know their past’s are kinda a mystery. But, please when you give the “Demons” the spotlight, make it as brilliant and magnificent as the skys. Ahh, maybe ignore the Madara part, I just finished watching a few episodes and it got my heart pumping lol. Love your work.
Why is this chapter so heartbreaking to read. A person can hear their story and say that their goals are noble but alas, war can turn noble people into “Demons.” Pirateaba, have you already developed the Demon King’s personality? His or her goals or believes? Have you already developed him or her? If you haven’t, I hope you can get INSPIRATION for him in Madara Uchiha. Perhaps a similar personality or journey, in his youth perhaps. If not, at least consider introducing the Demon King in the past. As he grew to be a badass with us not knowing we were following his journey. If not the Demon Kings, perhaps you can introduce a character who will become a Deathless, as we follow his journey. ( I still believe you can get inspiration from Madara Uchiha) if not him, at least get inspiration from this quote. “Wake up to reality! Nothing ever goes as planned in this accursed world. The longer you live, the more you realize that the only things that truly exist in this reality are merely pain. suffering and futility. Listen, everywhere you look in this world, wherever there is light, there will always be shadows to be found as well. As long as there is a concept of victors, the vanquished will also exist. The selfish intent of wanting to preserve peace, initiates war. and hatred is born in order to protect love. There are nexuses causal relationships that cannot be separated. I want to severe the fate of this world. A world of only Victors. A world of only Peace. A world of only love. I will create such a world. I am. The Ghost Of The Uchiha For truly this reality... Is a Hell.” -Madara Uchiha
Well, at least you're admitting to yourself you have a problem with counting :)
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Praise be🙏
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Enjoy your weekend Pirate! You earned it.