9.42 E
How strange. But the chapter's early and short? I wonder why~ (11,200 Words)
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It’s not about the size of the boat, it’s the motion of the ocean. Hopefully no antinium drowning in it though. Short or big as long as pirateaba on board is healthy that’s all that matters.
I disagree with chump1999, its cool to have short chapters but the long chapters also have their charm since the story is often in the style of slice of life where you can just wander around in the world and "live in it" instead of rushing from plot point to plot point. Regardless I love the story, keep it up pirate
Yeah, the meandering nature of online serials is a feature, not a bug. Rigid structures and a lean story is a hallmark for published books and I believe that it is born out of a limitation of the format more than anything. Works for some stories and worlds and preferences but that isn’t what TWI is all about imo, even if there are more focused arcs.
This All of this. By removing all of the fluff and keeping the writing tight, by keeping the chapter by chapter storyline unconvoluted, you reduce your writing load drastically (as well as stress) and improve the story as a whole. I loved this chapter because I could see and feel it. In a paragraph or two you advanced each individual character's stories (Rhaldion, etc.) and didn't drown me in information. Everyone (Liska) got to progress in a fun way and my subconscious filled in the details that you didn't provide. My hope is that by embracing the short and concise writing approach, you'll have the freedom to write the main storyline while having enough creative energy for you to work on side stories... all while avoiding writer's collapse by having rests and personal time.
Erek should really start collecting books.
What a great chapter to wake up to!
Ben10! Pisces
Thank you! You spoil us.
Yay? DAILY?!?
Hot-Damn!
You're an absolute legend ❤️
Whaaa I was not expecting this!!
2m
Im here first, this has never happened before.
wow that was fast...