9.39
I have done it. I have written the chapter. Also, the poll is out. It was harder this time due to sickness. It refuses to die. Anyways, chapter's out! Remember that Volume 1 rewrite I released? Feels like ages ago. (30,800 Words)
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Comments (11)
Why didn't Erin use [Boon of the guess] on Ryoka so that she could understand?
I don’t think it would work properly on her given that Ryoka doesn’t level, and Erin already expressed regret giving Mrsha’s full traumatic experiences to Venaz, so wouldn’t want to do that to Ryoka
I like this chapter but it was made vastly better by two things: Hedault learning of earth and that magical phrase, 'Have you tried enchanting it?' & Shaestrel challenging Erin to a game of chess with the promise of Chess 2.0 as the prize.
Although, I'm not sure about the 4 month time jump. Realistically so many things would have happened. Especially, as Erin and Ryoka were both newly committed to kicking butt and taking names just before the time jump.
Wow, the Ryoka growth/redemption chapter was unexpected, but everything I didn't know I needed. Amazing.
I love this series! Another great chapter.
Take your break! You deserve it after the Vol 1 rewrites. Take your break early. So many of us still need to read vol 1.
Started rereading from the start on Saturday. I'm back to 1.48R, & haven't checked yet to see which parts we're rewritten. Still good on the second/third time through.
Holy crap Pirateaba you're a writing monster. Thank you for being one of the high points of my month. Always excited to read the chapter.
I don't need sleep! I need answers!
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