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Winter is coming...no, wait. Again. Australia. Winter is coming to a part of the hemisphere. Really need to workshop that. (21,600 Words)
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So Erin gets a lot of skills at the end of the chapters these days - and I wish it were the opposite. I like how they change the chapter in a positive way while we see her get it early on - and then how it’s gets it’s use.
I have a question, last winter I don’t remember it getting cold until the frost fairies showed up. I remember that Erin was particularly surprised that everyone was saying Winter was coming because it didn’t feel cold and suddenly there was snow. This Time around seems a bit different, is that because there’s no frost fairies? Either way, the way it’s been written about all the characters seem to think it’s normal, or am I just remembering things incorrectly?
I remember this too but things changed due to the previous winter solstice and the things with Ivolethe which Erin hints at in one of the previous chapters or this very one,unsure.
A good chapter that made me smile at end, love chapters that connects to the inn.
Winter’s still coming in Australia, it’s just a bit further off!
We are in Tasmania The last three days have felt like winter 😉
Ooh, I can't wait for the next chapter. I want to hear what Magnolia has to say and what Erin will say to veltras, and Magnolia doesn't like Veltras either. The long-awaited conversation between Ryoka and the Antiniums. Hopefully, Magnolia is there too because that conversation will seriously leave her shaken. Let the chaos begin.
Interesting chapter. I feel like we had a huge cliffhanger with Erin multiple chapters ago that hasn't gotten fully addressed. She took a major backseat and a lot of time passed and now a new big thing is happening, like the plan to show off statues to groups at a time was just forgotten about. When is she going to show the horns statues? When is the haven going to actually consider what they learned with a calm mind instead of just reacting in the moment? It was a huge epic moment but the aftermath was just completely dropped to focus on multiple side characters for a while now. I've been struggling to get through each chapter since then.
Agreed — I love this story but I think there's too many meandering storylines — we should be focusing on specific ones and carrying them to the finish line. If they intersect, it's possible to tell the story from multiple perspectives, or just drop side storylines and reference them only when they intersect, then retroactively fill in with a future side chapter.
Alright guys. Yall got 4 days to buy milk and pepto bismol (or equivalents). Next chapter is gonna be SPICY
Love it. Thanks for the story. :)
What Sweden do
At least someone remembers us Australians
And New Zealanders, hopefully
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thank you for this treat