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When I am off a writing break, do I feel more energized? No...but I do write more, and better on average. Let's see about this chapter. (30,300 Words)
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Comments (16)
Love Fetohep. At first I wasn't sure but he has definitely grown on me.
Why is Gravesong under Science Fiction?
Love how the repecussions of the gods’ destruction of the souls are filtering in bit by bit, and also how Fetohep is working with Erin to indirectly prepare the world for the coming battle. Folks need to slow down and appreciate the grand scale picture being assembled here. Keep up the good work!
I see a lot of complaints in these comments, but I was enraptured while reading this. It was written somewhat different to previous chapters, but the build up to the revelation was perfect.
Some one from the new wave of humans that arrived from earth should end up in kelt properly probably engineer, mechanic, or something of like found wandering the edge of kelt something like that or ms soloist tells someone about. The place and goes
GoW:R had a great story
I hope Emperor Laken hears from Fetohep of Khelt too. His little empire also has no starving children...
Oof, Fetohep's heart wasn't the only thing broken by the fanmail ...
I love Fetohep but this chapter could have been more concise.
Great chapter, I enjoyed the bitter sweetness of it all.
Who wrote this chapter there was so much of Infodumping in the beginning.it wasn’t that bad but I liked how they used to introduce kingdoms before. Cut into smaller pieces throughout the chapter and seeing from other people’s pov
The brightest candles burn The fastest. I like Khelt. Fetohep’s one of the kindest and most caring kings in inworld. Despite the prejudice against necromancers, Khelt is always doing the right thing, and to me, it's like a middle finger to a world of haters. I can't wait for the next chapter.
I love him too, but 'always doing the right thing' is a bit far. The chapter did fairly bring up vis a vis yellow rivers piracy "[Fetohep] had effectively stolen enough medication for tens of thousands to cure one family and held the rest in his vaults in case the disease spread."
Another great chapter. Love your work. :)
the chapter password scares me xD
Thanks for the chapter!
