9.23 GGGGGGGGG

Soooooo gooooooood!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

Initial parts of it were a bit hard to grasp as the descriptions did not fully work themselves into my imagination well but that could really be just me. The chapter and storyline itself were better than what I was expecting from a dreaded mind-control arc and had a decent finish to it. Thanks for all the hard work that is consistently entertaining and fantastical even with the chapters on characters that I at times do not enjoy reading about. Again, thank you.

So i wasn’t looking forward to the doctor chapters and didn’t vote for it in the poll, but i just read both back to back and they were amazing, thank you for such exceptional storytelling.

Thanks for the chapter. I liked it, it was well done creepy, gave good closure on this, but it doesn't hit the spot like some of the other work you do, FOR ME. Also happy there was no redemptions for minds 1,3,4,5,6. Mind 2 was good shit. Still good work and interesting read.

Thanks a lot for the chapter! We appreciate your hard work!

This chapter and the one before are great. Hope we can get more chaps like these, showing the depraved realities of a fantasy world like this. Smillar to the Pisces and Alchemist chapters. The ups and the downs Great chap! 🍻

Does Dark Geneva still live?

GREAT CHAPTER PASSWORD 😭

Genius chapter title

9 Genevas.

That chapter and chapter title was fantastic. I liked the alien/seamwalker twist. After reading it and I had to get up and pace around, my s.o. was confused.

I'm going to be honest and say that this chapter struck me much less than the previous one. If I had to explain why, it's because I couldn't put myself in her shoes. Academically, i can say that something is horrible. But because I can't feel it, it doesn't affect me. It's like the difference between feeling sorrow for starving children in Africa and actually going and seeing it with my own eyes. Now. I know it's horrible and incredibly difficult to write about this subject matter. That's why I believe a "less is more" approach works best. Don't get in Geneva's head. Tell the story from the perspective of the surrounding characters. There were quite a few characters who saw the evil going on and died trying to help her. The more you leave how she feels up to the reader's imagination and simply move the story forward, death by death, the more visceral it becomes. It's almost like a blow to the gut, where every new perspective is a new punch. Until you finally get to Geneva and Niers and subconsciously the reader asks themselves if they're going to die too. I enjoyed the chapter, don't get me wrong. It brought conclusion to this arc. I just didn't feel it.

How many G's made it out, would be my question.

Bloody hell..

Absolute banger of a chapter poor genevas going to need a high level therapist

Absolute banger of a chapter poor genevas going to need a high level therapist

Well this was just amazing. Completely blown away. I can't wait to see some doctor w/ doctor doctoring that is to come. Thank you for your writing

That's a clever chapter label, if I'm interpreting it correctly. Many Gs indeed.

OMG this chapter! the horror! that ending! aaaaahhhh.

God that was so good and terrifying. I could feel the helplessness.

That was astoundingly good and perfect for this time of year. Great work as always!

lmao that pov acronym

Congratulations on writing something so disturbing Pirate. No complaints, just.. damn creepy.

That was sooooooo good.

Amazing. Can't wait to see what nightmares I have tonight

I wonder if each g has a meaning or if each g gains a number later?...

Wow. This was one of the best chapters yet imo

Khelt wants you to Vote Now!

Hoboy

what is this chapter name I'm scared

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