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Lawson

Benson - as in Olivia Benson from Law and Order SVU. But Benson also sounds like a servant's name which law should be

Yarnin could be a good name for the young elemental, a change of the Turkish word for tomorrow, and not as simple as trafficlighti.

It's a light so fiatlex let there be law instead of fiatlux let there be light

This was such a fun chapter. Thanks pirate : D

Call him Ryg! (Red, yellow, green initials)

A nice name for the elemental is Ampel, which means traffic light in German.

Nice chapter.

Working from what people new to it might call it, Magic Light. I can imagine that getting shortened to Maggy which would of course then beget the nickname Naggy

It could be named Lumen. It means light so it fits!

Name suggestions: "Al" short for Alarm. "Justice" as in just is alarming. "Blair" as in a Blaring alarm. Or, "bleep", just cause.

im surprised she didn't see the goblin's new home!

A good chapter, a bit disapointed that Erin didn't sense the Goblin door or that pebblesnatch didn't tell her about considering earlier chapters focusing on it. But it's the dangers with trying to move the story along to fast, you miss stuff like that, over all the goblin parts of the visit only got a few lines, was hoping for alot more. But it was a good chapter well written.

One of my favorite chapters ever from you - so meaningful, but no need for war or the chaos we've had here and there! A quiet corner, but important things are happening there!

For the name: Last light of Izril, Indictus, Cont(or count?) Roland or baron traffic. (Im am not sure if it is an upper bar or a lower bar on traffic :D)

What a wonderful chapter

Bravo. Excellent chapter. You have tugged on my heartstrings. Little girls should have fun, and wonder, and make friends. On the subject of names, maybe the inn should be renamed to the wondering inn, wink, wink.

I wonder how long it will be before The Quarass takes advantage of this new plane. I wonder whether she can use herself as the vessel for her own Elemental.

I look forward to the True Antinium Incarnating their Laws into the world. I think that Klbch may form a relationship with it, for he is lacking power but has the legacy needed to be it’s blade.

“Rivers drowned people. Name one river that, over the ages, hadn’t murdered someone who’d fallen into it. A few were great and generous and only took a few souls by accident, but most had rapids and sharp rocks.” I think the Lower Nile is a good example of the less murderess river

Hopefully a stream for the next chapter?

Finally a chapter about torte. This is gonna be great.