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January 16, 2022

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I'm off break! Did you read the book yet? Here's a novella. (29,200 Words)


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Comments (22)

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SaintMaceToTheFace · January 19, 2022

I love the king and his vassal’s chapters the most

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Gandeida · January 18, 2022

Loved the book, and I definitely want to read more about this parallel journey. I also enjoyed listening to the songs - some of them new to me - and watching the slo-mo walk video :) In chapter 1.06 P, I believe that this is supposed to be Ser Dalimont rather than Ser Dalius: He was bowing to Ser Dalius. The [Knight] bowed stiffly, and Seraphel waved a hand, although her face was pale.

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Jenny Farmer · January 17, 2022

Loved the book!

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Gonal · January 17, 2022

I want to note that Trey is wrong. Chess has not been solved. It is, in theory, a solvable game, but current computing power is VERY far from enough to solve it.

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Froyo Baggins · January 18, 2022

Had the same thought, butt didn't want to derail conversation. Kasperov's games with deep blue were also set up in such a way as to give the computer an advantage and not devalue IBM's investment though I'm sure we could do better than deep blue now.

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chump1999 · January 16, 2022

Liked the book. Liked the chapter. But as always, I always prefer anything to do with Erin first and foremost followed by anyone who has ties to Liscor with my favourites being the Antinium and the Horns (and Fehotep).

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Froyo Baggins · January 16, 2022

Real talk guys, should I read gravesong, or should I wait for the final form? I definitely wont reread soon so it's about how much it will alter the experience.

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DThornz · January 16, 2022

I'd say go ahead as Pirate said: "To use a Toren metaphor, imagine this is an undead skeleton. If there are new parts, think of it like Toren replacing his hand or polishing bones; the body remains. The only big removal will be song lyrics, which I have no copyright for...yet. The published version will have them in, but I have edited them all out in this version. You can still see the song name in such places, but the experience in changed and that is the one huge difference I can point to." Actual core story content should be the same. Only removal are song lyrics. Any further revisions would just be polishing the wording here and there and perhaps improving grammar/syntax as such.

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Rusty Shackleford · January 16, 2022

Loved Gravesong, I was glued to my tablet every night

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Chargcake · January 16, 2022

Ooooo! Now I can't wait for the next chapter of wistram!

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Ignat Remizov · January 16, 2022

The book was incredible! Can't wait to find out how Cara meets the other earthers, and who she contacts to make the song crystals. And what her Class evolves into when she becomes basically world-famous.

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Atlas Dwarf · January 16, 2022

The book was great and so was the chapter. The book is definitely a much smoother entry point into the Wandering Inn than the current Volumes 1 and 2 are.

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JasonD · January 16, 2022

Gravesong was everything I hoped for and more -- then again, that's sorta the Wandering Inn experience in a nutshell, isn't it? Looking forward to the rest of Cara's story :)

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NaO · January 16, 2022

Halfway through gravesong and i love what i see so far.

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Steven "Bull" Ratkovich · January 16, 2022

I binged Gravesong less than 30 minutes after you dropped it. Really good! When is book 2? ;)

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Craig · January 16, 2022

The book was mostly great, my biggest hesitation is that you said you were going to do another editing pass (which we all know really means you are going to write another 50k words 😂) Other than the fear of missing out, it was awesome!

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Neal Mayne · January 16, 2022

Book was fantastic

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DThornz · January 16, 2022

Pirate: Read the book yet? Me: Ah about that been going at it but it is a lo... Pirate: Here's a novella Me: Dammit Pirate

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Chase · January 16, 2022

Loved the book! Book 2 next month then?

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Ignat Remizov · January 16, 2022

how can you even ask that, we ducks are full enough already! Absolutely bursting!

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Hope D · January 16, 2022

Squeeeeeee thank you!!!

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Billy · January 16, 2022

Pog