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If I was an artificial intelligence, this story might come out faster. But I might also destroy the world. Always a catch (29,700 Words)
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Great chapter!!! Love it!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
ive left 3 to build up. this is hard werk. and another one out tomorrow!
Oh. Oh my. Spoiler alert... The Plains Eye tribe *knew*. Way back when. That's their only thing; they can "see", and could see the crystals that did this. And I bet they were a little weak tribe, and the drake's gave them a deal...and now they are the biggest, strongest tribe. And they push hard for the "old" ways. That the gnolls can't do magic. That anyone who pushes otherwise is "removed". *That any white gnolls, who have magic power despite what has been done, are "Doom" and must be exhaustively hunted and killed.* They literally betrayed their people for a deal with the drake's, way back when.
Except the plains eye tribe clearly didn’t know. They didn’t even know the mage had been coerced into lying by people claiming to be them.
Faster? My perception of reasonable word count is already horribly skewed by the current pace.
Brilliant chapter Pirate!
Oh man... Crippling the magic of an entire race?.. That's just bad karma. No way that doesn't come back to bite you.
Ah, great chapter as always
Very interesting chapter!
I consider the world an acceptable price.
The whole vampire conspiracy thing didn't seem plausible... And this one doesn't either.
Actually this one seems more plausible to me because the explanation is ...magic. which can and is acceptable for writing fantasy, on occasion. Plus the fact that all gnolls are on new continent, mostly. The vamp conspiracy made less sense, because you'd have to practically douse the whole continents water supply in expensive silver, and consistently throughout the ages. The five families would need to be involved and have to know, but we haven't heard from them yet. Still, I am enjoying these twists immensely.
Stunning
Ooooooh shit its all coming together
If you destroy the world....we could all move to innworld. I can't decide which class I would choose.....not a clown....
I'm grateful you're authentic and not artificial. Imagination is organic.
As long as you destroy the world after the story is finished.