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It's me again! Three years early? We're back to writing! I had a nice break. (31,000 Words)
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Love it ❤️❤️❤️❤️
I, for one, loved starting out with meeting of the tribes. New characters and old friends, new twists. Great chapter
Strong chapter right out the bat, vacations are important!
Amazing chapter. Welcome back pirate.
It’s always so weird to me that people want to hurry back to the innfolk. Like, why wouldn’t you want a follow up on Merish? It’s not like he and Viri are the only survivors of the best 3 chapter interlude sequence.. oh wait. They are. I’m eagerly awaiting Merish to join Ilvress’s task force which should be any chapter now. He might even bring along MATH. My only regret is that the entire chapter wasn’t devoted to him. Well, lil miss perfect was also really great. I look forward to her joining the fellowship. Since they need a peerless tracker if they’re gonna catch Wanderer. I hope battle bot chills out though. Maybe get the kid some dreamleaf and let him paint some happy little trees in his mind’s eye instead of untold carnage. Actually, a lot of gnolls could really use some dreamleaf.
I will now refer to him solely as Battle Bot from now on 🤣
I liked that the chapter had a focus on someone else other than the main cast. I appreciate that aba wrote about the effects of ptsd. Looking forward to more chapters, thanks!
Welcome back Pirateaba and thank you
That was good, but I was hoping for more than just meeting of the tribes
I didn't mind that it was a meeting of the tribes chapter, I had been waiting for one and I loved the other ones, but I was hoping that the story would progress forward and not mostly sideways, nothing really happened for most of the chapter and suddenly it ended. There where a few references in a few lines that tried to push the story forward but nothing more, and they where super short, no build up, no great reactions. Crossing fingers that this chapter as a whole, is a buildup for something more.
Great chapter...I agree though I had to get past the fact it started with a new character. It was a fun chapter that let us see a wide variety of skills. So many plot lines now I need some Cliff Notes for everything going on......
Big hell yeah
After a long break I just want a main character chapter. I'm having a hard time getting into a 31k chapter about a character we barely know. If it was the second chapter after a break, I'd be fine. But I'm always disappointed when the first chapter back is focused on someone we don't know and doesn't involve any of the main cast.
I'm sure it will end up being great as always, but it's like finding out you'll be getting a good burger when you were planning on sushi.
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That was so good
And here I was preparing my hibernation until you came back 2024, Aba!
ILU. Thank you
Thanks