Interlude - The [Rower] and the [Bartender]
Actual half-chapter because I spent most of this writing stream editing. 6 hours of it. Revised chapter released on Tuesday! Anyways, short chapter for now! (11,000 Words)
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Comments (17)
How do people find out what is in the black parts of the text? When a word gets ____?
You can look at the source code of the page and usually its written there in plain text.
Well at least we found out what happened to one of missing boys. :( The ending was painful though. :(
My wife misscarried last sunday. This... doesn’t help. Its a brilliant twist, just not what i needed so soon.
I’m so sorry for your loss. May God grant you twins for what you have lost. that light 💡 up your lives. I never thought about what people go through after a miscarriage but after reading this chapter I am now conscious of it.
Great chapter!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
The gods in your story are far from being worst than you, Pirateaba. You make all your characters suffer again and again for no other reason than making your readers suffer too. It's a monstruous sheme about SUFFERING.
Pirateaba fluctuates between the highs and the lows and they are not afraid to kick you while you are still down. I think that is one of the things that make this story so powerful, it's very realistic in that way.
Will revised chapters be entering the schedule on a regular basis?😢 I understand the revision takes a lot of work and messes up the schedule, but it will be hard to wean myself down to only 3 new chapters a month! 😭
Belavierr just turned to Facebook notifications. U turn them off but somehow they will send me something about someone very aggressive advertisement. . Nice chapter
Like the direction the first half took, might make that char more fun to read as for the second half of the chapter, just made me sad, we really need Erin back to be a candle in the darkness of that story before it turns into something really bad or maybe Mrsha "The great and powerful" can work some of her special magic to help to keep the darkness away.
This series has gotten way too dark. I read this to enjoy and to get a little break from the shit show outside. But lately any enjoyment has been taken out.
It was always going to turn out this way though. It was obvious from earlier volumes that this was the direction the story would take. It was only a matter of time for when certain events would happen. For example, the dead gods coming back and being powerful villains has been teased since the early volumes, and the consequences were painfully obvious. Let's not forget Rhir and the other major threats across Innworld. Also, it's been a slow escalation of devastating event after devastating event for Liscor, Erin, and the characters we've come to know and enjoy there. It was only a matter of time before a major character died or worse, which in this case turned out to be Erin, though she's probably going to be revived at some point in the future.
And here I was thinking we’d get nothing due to editing. You spoil us Pirate!
I'm so glad we got something to read. I was saddened by editing denying us a chapter.
Strong and emotional chapter. A fitting length for it.
There was a time when 11000 words was counted as long chapter... Pepperidgefarm remembers