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I have written more words! Whew. Two more chapters until my break! Short chapter...probably not next time. Let's just be honest. (25,600 Words)
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Another great chapter! Miss you Zel!
Lovely -- you do amazing work readjusting & constantly actually refining your characters. ;)
Yeah this chapter had so many references to old things I'd almost forgotten about, it made me realize I could stand to reread it.
Made me a bit sad to think about Zel Shivertail again. Wanna re-read all the chapters again.
Same. I’m planing on re reading this just look I do the wheel of time. I’m wondering what new things will pop out now that we know
Thanks :)
Excellent chapter.....went 3 directions i didn't expect....if I was Pallas I'd try and take the door......hopefully its become part of the inn by now. Now if Erin will get a level 45 skill like....(expanded magical field) allowing her door to go........farther. Love the story!
Thank you!
As much as Pallas deserved it, I can’t help feel Erin’s my way or the highway attitude is gonna get called on soon. It has so far worked because on other side care about her like Chaldion or Saliss. But there’s only so much the city leaders can take before they call her bluff and not give in to her temper tantrum.
Power means nothing if not exercised. Erin has shit tons of soft power and while its use might have negative reprecussions it also has some positive ones as well. You call it a temper tantrum but acess to the door way is incredibly powerful and is only growing in relevancy. Its not really a bluff if it has real teeth.
Sooo good.... need that time machine again.
Nice
Great job
Holy *balls* was that gratifying to read.
Thank you for the chapter. Erin also has clout to throw around.
Makin' my day, pirate