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The last chapter this month! I'm on a much-needed break! Hope you enjoy and look out for the monthly poll sometime this week! (18,900 Words)
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Loved the couriers -- yes I teared up ... but I hope the Lord finds a way out of his trap. He's an ass but he'd be worse if controlled by those bastards. ><
Wow what a ride, great chapter!!!!
The theme of showing off high level characters continues. I do like seeing them once in a while, but when they're too common and especially when they're mentioned just in passing they start to feel less special. I liked Cognita and Feor getting a chance to flex- they're established characters and seeing a bit of what they can do is cool. Very curious about whatever Cognita attacked. Good chapter overall though, very excited about the faerie flowers and glad to see some lose threads moving forward a bit.
A peculiar chapter, while the storm, and ball plotlines were not uninteresting. and resolve parts of the D and halfseeker plots. They still feel like a side court performance as the hints of the center court events from other plotlines take most of my attention. Trey arriving at Wistram, Octavia reaffirming her recent comittment to friends and allies, Saliss new strange potion for Maviola. The total disruption of trade in terandria resulting from Aliendramus’s war, for aid in which calanfear promised Veltras son Lyonette‘s hand in marriage. Even the potential interractions of the Titans students and the Inncrowd. Have a nice time off, then come back and tell us more about the fantastical world of the wandering inn! ^^
Good chapter. Laken and witches save Tyrion's sons, calling it now
I was kind of hoping to see the Druid enclave in his lands make an appearance, but they are more militant in nature so probably not.
Well written chapter. But I felt that too many things were crammed in. Cure journey Nations confiscating the ships Magic Storm Ball Yellow flower breakthrough I think if they were broken down it would have been better. cure + confiscating + storm ball + yellow flower + inn The storm was a little surprising but it fits with the cure transport. If there was a little build up to it then it would have been even greater. The ball was completely left field for me.
I really hope someone can/will help Tyrion
Ah...it was a great chapter...well written I really enjoyed it...glad the cure made it across the sea and we got to see into some sea couriers....but i agree....the inn needs some catch up to many king and clown stories leaves me in need of the inn....and ryokas treasure needs some descriptions (wonder if she could find the lonely road again on her own)...hopefully the inn will continue on pirates return....i need coffee, bikes, skateboards, potions of youth, goblins, and treasure badly............i feel the mega storm might like a field of sage grass located over a hugely magical dungeon. Enjoy your break!
people saying that the inn needs to catch up are weird to me, we had more inn this volume then any other volume bar vol 1 and the plots were rushing forward on all fronts, while things like clown were rotting for 3 volumes with 0 progress. I would like inn, but it got plenty of focus this volume
... Felt like this chapter was a bit weak. The storm came out of nowhere and really seems like it came to be just to add an obstacle for the cure. I think pirates and foreign nations confiscating the cure would have been enough. Having a storm just start up seemed random and out of left field. Seems like the plot of Saliss, Erin and Maviola/The Ball/Octavia got put to the side for fluff. Felt like that revelation that we are being cliffed on got stolen from us :P. Made for the cliffy. But the Ball itself could have been a side chapter where we learned a lot more about culture. Similarly, Octavia getting the fame and reknown she's always wanted and refusing Palass' sponsorship could have been shown as a huge moment of character growth. I see that you wanted the chapter busy, to show the unfortunate impact on Tyrion Veltras and gain the audience's sympathy for him, but the storm just seems so contrived, even more so when there are so many cool events happening to the side that are happening off screen. Hope we see that revelation soon!!! 3 K chapters and then a random storm seemed to push the meat of the story away this month. Felt like the storm was crazy music going everywhere, and every now and then we would get a clip about the plot, like a trailer or something. So long to wait for the next chapter! Successfully excited... Just a bit bitter.
There have been mentions of the danger of weather spells before, and a few characters have worried they're being overused aloud. At a guess Pirate probably went 'okay what irons have I got in the fire and can I combine any of them?'
"The Lord of House Veltras called for aid. And heard only silence." This makes me so sick and angry inside. anyone who would hurt children deserves to be erased from existence. Anyway thanks for the chapter.
I hope we see some retribution and some loss of faith amongst the thorns for killing those healers too....
Great chapter! Though I am sad it didn’t end on a W.
This was thrilling! Thank you and hope you have a great break to recharge.
I'm dumb. When they said the pirates were toasting Waterbear with drinks, I thought they were like waterboarding him or something. I mean the BloodWhatever raiders are monsters so I assumed the BloodWhatever pirates would be too.
The Bloodtear Pirates are the original group and would tear apart the Raiders apart if they ever ran into each other because the raiders are using their name.
Chair gripping action in this chapter. I loved it. Thanks pirate
Your chapters are a much-needed break for me. So, thank you for that.
Thank you!