7.46 K
A bigger chapter at last! Is this good or bad...? (26,700 Words)
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Whoo! Minotaurs!
me no like the K
Pw for 7.47k?
And it appeared as i was typing 😁
I love the K chapters! The race was amazing to read! Looking forward to part two
Please god no more of part two of K
I just don't really see Flos interacting with any part of the story I care about. Like of all the plots or sub plots Flos ist the least interesting because his story arcs feel repetitive, really low risk of him losing, and I like the wandering inn for the not normal fantasy characters..And FLos is a conquering king, yea. Give me more of anything else, please .
WIhat? love the king, its cool to follow the antagonistic side from time to time and he is very carismatic in a twisted kind of way. And the chapter with troy in the monster city was one of my favorites. Also to watch Realt strugle against impossible odds have been a thrillride.
Well punctuation was never my forte
Wow which is great and influential language for how tremendous is this addition to the sum of the wandering inn saga? !! I am blown away at the way you twist and wriggle your characters , ah a satisfied sigh exudes from my coffee tainted mouth. Well done Pirate
Thank you!
So I know that king of challenges is his class and king of duels is his title but does anyone else sometimes find it a bit clunky how they just switch randomly between the two when referring to Raelt? It's not really a criticism but I think it would flow better if they just stuck to one. King of duels makes him sound like a Yu-Gi-Oh character
Other characters refer him to his title king of duels but the “narrator” of the story refers to his class King of challenges.
I went into this chapter not expecting a fight for some reason. Huh
I feel like Mr Flos. I did not see the Minotaurs coming.... Were there any hints in prior chapters that lead to this? Last time I remember they were helping Wil and the gang. But damn that chase part! fantastic writing.
there were several sprinkled among the niers chapter but the first one would be in 4.06KM where a diplomat from minos asked funding from izril nobles for a fleet against flos
Good chapter! :-)
I just realised Fetohep is basically Willy Wonka
It’s good .. longer the bigger
Thank you!
So many plot threads, I can't wait to see pirate weave something wonderful with them! <3
Not a single Erin chapter after a long break :(
Preach