7.31

Holy somthing this was amazing

Are we getting something tonight

Can anyone point me to the chapter where Erin causes a coup in Esthelm? I seem to have missed it and now can’t find it going back. Thanks.

The old Lord's arguments to Magnolia felt weird considering he had defensible reasoning. Felt like him saying it's unfair was kinda lazy, where can that argument even go?

I like this much better than the original ending to 7.30.

Good chapter!

Is Erin not leveling her warrior class because the system is always trying to consolidate the class? And Erin always cancels that.

The map is awesome btw.... I didn't think that the WanderingInn was so far away from the city though. You can basically walk the entire diameter of the city instead of walking to the end. Good thing there's the door, otherwise I can't imagine she would have regulars. Even with patrols monsters could get that get drunk regulars between the gate and the Inn. Medieval archers had maximum range from the walls at about 200M (.13 miles). Similarly Bird is firing from his tower.... During the story, we've heard that Halrac and Bird exchanged shots from the wall and the tower. Being .75 miles away seems a bit much, even for a fantasy world.... Maybe not for Halrac, but Bird seems to be a bit of a prodigy even then. In a fantasy world I get it, but still that means the wall are only constantly scanning for monsters let's say .2 miles away (doubling otl range for fantasy reasons) for the regular guardsmen.... With Bird scanning from the tower, let's say .3 -.4 miles away cause he's awesome, that still leaves .2-.3 miles not constantly on guard.... If the Inn was only .5 miles away though, it seems more credible. Sorry, my mind went on a tangent.

Great job with the chapter! I'm glad you cut the old version out! This one works way better

Thanks! The rework of the end of the last chapter made for a really good chapter.

Loved the chapter Pirateaba!

I really appreciated the change you made to last chapter and how you re did it this chapter. This felt like a much more authentic treatment of what it means for people to riot.

That was a great chapter. The change I felt was a more realistic and natural approach to what was happening. I find myself frustrated when I read stories where the protagonist can do no wrong and all their actions work out. I like this story where your main characters are flawed and depicted as human characters not just invincible super heroes.

God this chapter set up so many things , I also appreciated the changed last chapter, riots aren't a simple thing . Thanks for writing :)

She needs to get substantial concessions from those lords for trade deal, they were part of Tyrion’s army and set off the riots. Best to sic Lynette and Malvolia on them, maybe some Wall Lords as well if she can find any

Love Grimalkins thought process...lol after this I wonder what he will come up with.

Thanks, great chapter. But you forgot to add Grimalkin frantically taking notes at the end.

So many great things in this chapter! Re-read it almost immediately after my first read through, and loved it even more the second time round.

Wow amazing long chapter thanks 🙏 Very satisfying

Great chapter, thanks!

Really good chapter and improvement over the cut part!

Amazingly well done.👍

Now this is how you write about a riot. The previous attempt was unrealistic. This was beautifully done 👌

Thank you!!

I was waiting for this like an addict.

Definitely good. Thank you for the chap

Thanks for the chap.

More=more better