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If I click refresh a lot, something magical may happen :O
If it is taking this long It’s probably long chapter
Love me a good king chapter and this one is great keep up the good work!
God I love K chapters.
She could use text to speech software for typing
Giant Beholder titans are the worst especially the eldrich type and their that which does not live and eternal lie. They are a mess to clean up and they have the worst table maners as they consume your mind from within. As an aside Piesces needs some flesh mage levels then he could be a life arch mage.
We should raise money for a typist for our great writer
Am in
I just joined and was trying to access your post. My password doesn't work. :( Did I miss how I should make a password for the post?
The password is in pirates post, between the word count and the link
It could be the Deva See Hoo Ha Dtaa (Four Ears Five Eyes)
Hands down the best flos chapter so far. I wonder why Gazi did not use her magic eye when she was trying to kidnap two special people. Also I want to see what the twins are going to shape up to be given how they are leveling so much slower than erin.
She underestimated Erin and Ryoka a lot because she knew she was a lot stronger. A bit of arrogance led to her eye being poked and damaged so she probably won’t make that same mistake a second time.
Really good chapter! And be careful with your hands. :-(
please pirateaba use a word to hand translator. There are a few good once out there and most of them have trial versions. That should at least lower your burder a good chunk as a first draft
Phenomenal chapter! I still want to know what Trey meant by “it came from our world” Earthlings bring about ‘change’ wherever they go. If there’s destiny or fate in inn-world then I’d say that Erin injured Gazi to lead to this specific outcome. The fact that that creature came from a different world and that ending just makes me shiver.
The old ones.
I am usually not a fan of the Flos chapters, but this one was really good. But seriously PirateAba, I love your work but PLEASE don’t hurt yourself over it. Yes I would be sad if you didn’t write for a while, but I would be a lot sadder if I knew writing was physically hurting you. Take it easy on yourself and even consider taking a time off or even getting a cowriter to help you out. I am pretty sure we can start a GoFundMe for any expense our favorite pirate needs! (Second favorite if you’re counting Garia’s dad)
Adding on to Ali's comment. I'm stunned by your patreon approach. You're the most prolific writer in webfiction. You're also the best writer in webfiction. And you're not being much of a business-person. I personally am far more the "expert" than the businessperson, so I'm rather sympathetic. That said, I would think that adjusting your patreon tiers, splitting your next 2 50,000 word chapters into 3 bits, and giving some higher tier folks 2 or 4 chapters ahead would do something for your income. And your fans are quite impressed, and many of us would pay happily.
Thanks for another wonderful chapter.. i really enjoyed this chapter. The twins storyline is epic and even though i prefer erins storyline, this chapter had me hooked. Cant wait for more
MORE KING OF DESTRUCTION!
Do we know what Karak is?
You mean Karas. No mention of it in any previous chapter; it must be referring to Qualvekkaras. It has a massive sandstorm surrounding it after all. Seems like it could be really strong.
This is one of your better chapters, and I love much of what you do. I can't post on wordpress effectively, so here: "“Someone poke a finger into my eye.” => Poked You already fixed the other one.
I find it harder to stay engaged reading Chandar chapters. To me it feels like the twins are just side actors and their story just does not draw me in like Erin/Ryoka story lines might. Still a great read and what an ending.
Its kinda like reading Dragonlance, and getting chapters that go "Meanwhile, in Ravenloft..." At some point the streams will cross, and we'll come back to the K chapters.
Thank you!
I love Chandrar and the King of Destruction, fight me patrons!
Sorry to say, I still don't care about chandrar at all. I would like you to write about chandrar for a whole month and tell us beforehand so that I remove my patronage for said month until you go back to any izril or baleros. Maybe it's because so much of these chapters just tell us : oh wow, these guys are great, look how great they are, aren't they great? With just a bit of actually interesting information buried within.
Can't disagree more! Chandrar has THE most diverse set of characters. We get to see real changes in the continent more consistently then anywhere else! Plus high level characters are more fun.
I could not read this chapter because of how much I hate the king of destruction. I hope we are done with him. It was painful to read the few first Paragraphs I hope there is nothing important. I want to make them drink acid jar.
It’s important and far more interesting than you might think. It’s slightly dark as well.
Good gripping 'K' chapter... I'm rarely a fan of 'K' chapters, but this one was really good... Maybe continue to evoke more horror in the King of Destruction chapters.... It kind of makes the King of Destruction a more ambivalent character, knowing that his entire continent is such a shit show. I'm still waiting for the horrors of slavery to be shown. You've heavily implied that 'Slave' is a class..... And we know that classes can change emotions, and how someone thinks... Slavery can be a lot more horrible and humiliating in this world I think then even our world has heaped and heaps upon its victims.
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