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I'm sort of bad at 'short' chapters. But it's shorter? Nah, I suck at brevity. (21,800 Words)
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Erin, Laken, Antinium, Goblins, Niers
No Kind of Destruction. No Laken. Im happy.
So long as it's not about Laken I am pretty happy about whatever she decides to write.
I prefer 1) Erin 2) Ryoka 3) Horns 4 ) Selys 5) Rags 6) Antinium 7) Geneva 8) Blackmage
In terms of Favorite substories, I prefer 1. Erin + her "family" 2. Ryoka 3. Goblins 4. Toren 5. Niers 6. Antinium 7. Horns 8. Laken 9. Other adventurers (Halfseekers, etc.) 10. Flos 11. Necromancer 12. Magnolia, etc. 13. Trey+Teres 14. United Nations ... 47. The Clown
That said ... I like Flos a lot, and enjoy his story. Less so, so far T+T solo, And Rhir is not tonally good for me.
It's interesting that people are so polarized when it comes to Flos. His chapters haven't been my favorite, but does it not seem like Flos's story has yet to start. His chapters feel like a precursor to much more. For my part, I will trust in Pirate. It's gone pretty well so far. :D
Part of that is probably how disconneccted Flos feels compared to the rest of the story. Even baleros chapters have several earthlings and the titan vs just 1 maybe 2 earthlings in K chapters and a character nobody else has interacted with. Gazi is the only one we knew, briefly, and she doesnt DO a lot in the K chapters lately.
Flos chapters are some of my favorites along with the Horns
I feel that in this specific chapter you made a lot of mistakes, which you usually don't do. E.g. spelling, weird sentences or referring to Reim as Rhir.
Shsss please didn’t say she made a mistake because she might say my hand and take along a month of vacation.
Is it war!? Hahaha!
I can’t believe I’m saying this. But If you are ever writing about the kind of Distraction. 500 words will do.
“He went places, he convinced people to join him with his sheer awesomeness, he made his people level faster, he still has no great plan except ‘I will conquer everythang!!’ And the two kids he has imprisoned are still VERY impressed with him despite all the slavery, conquest, and unnecessary war”
Meh dont care for flo chapters myself. They feel like filler, we know he is going to win and most of the side characters pretty meh.
Every fantasy book needs one overpowered character that wallops the world.
MORE KING OF DESTRUCTION!
Maybe it’s just because I am not a fan of Flos chapters, but I think next time you should take it easy on yourself writing these... Goblins chapters however.... those you might afford some sacrifices to.... hey! I don’t make the rules!