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'Tis I! Your author! And here is a shorter chapter than average! You laugh, but it's true! (17,600 Words)
sillyMistakes
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Don't forget how young he is!
Older than Yellow Splatters I am sure.
I'm starting to get really, really, angry about how Bird is being treated. He almost started a continent wide war and killed everyone in Liscor just as the start. And all he gets is nothing bird related for a week or two!? The damage he may have caused is incalculable considering Erin was slowly getting Liscor and Pallas to accept the antinium. Pirateaba, I love your writing, but Bird can't get away with this. If Erin had to spend time in jail for using a skill, Bird's trespass and violation of the antinium treaties should merit more than a light scolding! Erin should be struggling to keep Bird from being executed right now, and Bird should be in prison or dead. You built up so much tension with the wyvern fight and Bird being in Pallas, then his outrageous lie in front of the whole world; you had me ready for there to be an actual war, or for bird to be summarily executed, or for some grand legal battle! And then, nothing! Worse still, this section - and Bird failing to understand bthe gravity of what he did, because he isn't that stupid, I remember when he shot an arrow at that one good ranker and how distraught he was when he realizes he did something bad - has made me dislike Bird a lot, and question Liscors intelligence. If Zevara had cut him down when he came through the door, only Erin would have cared, and it would have been entirely reasonable.
Burn the eretic! All hail Bird The Hunter,favorite son of the free Queen!
Oh I am loving this
It would be awsome if Erin or marsha would move the ashe fire bees in the sanctuary. With apista as the new queen
That’s such a cool idea!
I was hoping/expecting to learn about the Garden of Sanctuary. Also hoping it would be something like this. Well played
that cliffs so sharp I could cut myself..... sigh cliffed again, and like a cucked husband I'll just keep coming back.....sigh
I'll have to borrow the first half of that. "that cliff's so sharp I'm bleeding". Thanks
Thank you!!
You have me really worried for Mrsha and Numbtounge now.
You gotta admit, that is pretty funny.
Wow today your early but 🙏
