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Nooooooo. NOOOOOO. I can't write short chapters! Check the after-chapter notes for a writing promise! (22,100 Words)
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This chapter was a constant 🤯
Ilvriss is such a good character. Out of literally every other character in the series he is the most well-rounded, realistic, and interesting.
Why would you want to write short chapters!? Double their length and I will conquer a country and gift it to you in tribute!
I love the fact you struggle to write shorter chapters. I'd love to see what your outlines look like.
Looking forward to reaching this chapter! Still in volume 4 at the moment, but I'm hoping I can shrink that gap by a volume or two during my vacation in a couple weeks. Keep it up! Loving it so far!
Thank you!
How did Erin become famous from simply knowing Bird and not from leading a goblin army against the Goblin Lord? That's what confuses me. Ilvris' opinion of Erin seems also exceptionally high this chapter; I am not entirely sure it was warranted by his experiences with her. But amazing chapter as always. I am in love with your writing. I anticipate Niers' and Erin's meeting.
I believe its because most people didn't actually see her lead a goblin army. The attack on Pallas was lived stream around the world. My guess would be that they assumed it was an exaggeration or a tall tale, only confirmed when she was seen ordering bird.
I'm just gonna say it, Lyonette has become a bit of a b!@#$. When the inn reopened, she had that whole queen of the castle vibe going on. So darned bossy and possessive.
Yeah I am starting to hate her. I feel like she is trying to hold back Erin. I love this book because of Erin crazy days u know. 😤 and bird
Nice chapter pirateaba. I am now left wondering whether the Titan will finally be moved to reveal himself to Erin, or if the scrutiny that he knows she will now be under from all the other major players will prevent him from making any overt moves
I love you 😘 I have been waiting this like I didn’t even know 😂
Thanks!