September 21, 2019
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Aarnard Thompson · September 22, 2019
Holy crap that ending. Phenominal.
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KDP · September 22, 2019
Good arc!
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TinkTank · September 22, 2019
Spoiler alert: I loved the twist but writing at the end felt forced. Like Ryoka who seemed to have struggled to even move the wind this arc now suddenly changed the path of a fire twister? Wish we could have spent more time on her overcoming her struggle with the wind.
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John Koor · September 22, 2019
Umm. Spoilers?
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Hursha · September 21, 2019
Hmmm. I am not a fan of the ending of this chapter.
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Screwball · September 21, 2019
I was always on the fence for this Arc but that ending just sold the entire Arc for me. Good Work keep it up!
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Rukshan · September 21, 2019
Damn... that was well done. Have no doubt
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AReader · September 21, 2019
loved it. Didn't see the twists coming.
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Seadrake · September 21, 2019
The best and the worst part of your writting is just how damn good you are at characterisation, and how little plot armor you put in.