August 17, 2019
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Aha! A long chapter before a shorter one! This may work! (20,000 Words)
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Jennifer · August 17, 2019
Thanks!
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John Koor · August 17, 2019
I loved the opening with the worker.
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ShadowBlah · August 17, 2019
A beautiful chapter. Truly a potential fatal flaw (or at the very least a gripe) that appears in too many novels is wonderfully handled and breathes life into the true scope of this world. A humbling chapter. Loved it.
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Andrew · August 17, 2019
Thank you!