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He's back! And he's not the only one! Read to find out what that meant and how clever it was! (24,600 Words)
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Whiny plebs. 6.12K is out but the next one isn't. I am unreasonably annoyed that it might be due to your whinging
I like Flos myself. He's a very interesting character, and is fun to read about just for himself, regardless of whether he's having a current impact on the main storyline or not. The doctor isn't impacting the main story either, and everyone goes bananas over her.
I just don't feel like I'm learning anything interesting enough about him anymore. We know he's a grandiose entitled asshole with mindfuck skills that provide him with mostly artificial loyalty and he knows how to win without fighting but wants to kill everyone who doesn't agree with his regime. I guess I did find him interesting at the start, but not anymore. The thing about the doctor: she's humane and relatable. She showcases a struggle. Flos showcases an op dude getting what he wants.
Sorry to say I glossed over most of this chapter. I liked the first 2 king chapters or so, but now, I wish Flos was just a background threat than an integral part of the story. Hearing about his kingdom growing by passing would be enough until he really is a threat (again, for me)
Yeah, I'm having trouble getting through this one. The beginning is an info dump, not about Flos or his specific area, but a different nearby kingdom that he recently conquered. I don't mind Flos chapters, and recently voted for the Flos and the Blacksmith bonus chapter, but I just can't find the motivation to read a long background and setup for a kingdom that seems like it will soon be swept away by Flos.
Why Flos? Hes the only boring character. Your polls showed so many other way more interesting sounding side stories.
Flos is part of the story and some of us like those chapters too. Why should we never hear about him? It is not like every 2nd (or 5th, 10th etc) chapter is about him...
Did you purposely lowball the word count? 😂
Thank you!
That felt like much longer than 12k words. Did anyone else feel that way?
Flos is always a slog....
Did you mean 6.12 K and not 5.12 K ?
Back to the future baby!