5.01
This...is one of those chapters. (14,800 Words)
cityOfInvention
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I actually didn't really like this chapter. I thought Erin was being way too cocky. I didn't understand how she could be so comfortable in a new city and causing all this trouble. She sorta reminded me of an annoying child. She got arrested in a foreign city and didn't even seem the least bothered by it. I would be freaked out if a bunch of armed soldiers showed up out of nowhere, hurt my friends, and then arrested me, but she didn't even care at all. And I don't understand why she thought it was so unreasonable that they would confiscate the door either. She broke into a WALLED city. Does she think the walls are just there for decoration? Of course they are there partially to make sure dangerous people can't just enter the city. Look I still love the story, I just thought I would give my two cents on this chapter.
Well given her experiences it isn't much of a big deal. And the door (artifact utility aside) is one of the few good things to come of the tragedy of the original Hammerad group.
Lmao that was beautiful
A great chapter, thank you!
Wont lie. Saw 5.0 posted on rrl, refreshed constantly till this came up ^_^