10.13
I wrote a lot. But I'm going to get help! Maybe. I'm working on it. Wait, is this even a problem for you? (51,859 Words)
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Just an opinion: i think this chapter and 10.14 are a bit too chaotic and the pace is very fast… but still love the story
Poor Saliss|Onieva! So close to hope, yet so far away 😢
🤣 I could see it
Gold gold gold!! Alright onto the chapter itself. Quite fun. Erin skills slowly impacting the inn, and maybe even lyonnette too? Is the princess of the inn showing qualities of the “queen of the castle” or it’s mascot? Bird coming back as female confused me. I get the idea of hey if you get to comeback why not change it up. That logic is fine, it’s just new and different and I can’t really picture Bird with breasts so I’m glad the inn chaos stopped too to go “huh?!” It also feels a bit werid for bird because he never cared for these things, he never brought it up, so why do it suddenly. That is what dosent make sense, the logic applied to the context of this character comes out of nowhere. I think because it makes no difference to who bird is I might still go with he/him in my mind for clarity and easy of visual n understanding, since that’s how he was, and there was no ease of transition into this new thing. he might switch again and again so having to do the switches everytime oof. Marsha showing her heart and checking up on everyone was lovely (and the meme with Lyonette) Speaking of lyonette I didn’t get the joke rose was calling out on her? Anyone get the earth reference?
Fawlty Towers by John Cleese from the seventies. A great sitcom about the worst Innkeeper in Britain. The episode is about the time a family from Germany scheduled a stay, "No one mention the war!"
Great drama and . . . . . . wonderful Bird is back!
loved it!
I didn’t have time last night to read this whole thing. I did anyway. I am gladly suffering the consequences this morning having dreamt of gold. I really thought Lyonette was going to drop coin on high quality chairs for the inn. Why not get the most comfortable amenities for your guests if gold is no factor?
…Gold
. . . . . . . . .Absolutely THRILLED with the style and pacing of this chapter. The bit about chairs was masterfully done. Her internal dialogue with the gold was great. And honestly? The back and forth with the Brothers had me tear up a bit. Superb. The real MVP of the chapter is of course that absolute banger of an artwork with Imani. "No one ever asks how do I fit?" 🤣. Bravo.
Imani is definitely born again hard -Lee Emory
Looking forward to reading this!
Gold,Gold,Gold
Can’t wait to read it!
Whoop whoop!
Can’t wait till I have time to read this!
I flipping love you! :)
Who dare disturb…👁️👄👁️ let me grab my glasses
Thankyou pirate for all you do.
I personally enjoy the longer chapters, but I still think it would be healthier to try and write shorter chapters.
Not a problem for me Pirate. I don't ever shirk my duties to read your story. Never, ever.
huzzzzah!!!!
Yay! Edit: Nice use of excoriated... can't believe that 52K words is part 1. Can't wait til next Sat.