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Take Off Ch.99 (Season 2).pdf 66.9 MB
September 26, 2023

[Early Access] Take Off S2 Ch.99 "Parallel Paths"

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It's here!! So many subway scenes!! I think last chapter I got something wrong: the ACE trains at Canal street is not Chinatown, but oh wells reverse gentrification let's goo. I dedicate this chapter to my love and hate relationship with the MTA🫶

I hope you guys like this one!! And also remember to sign up to be on NSFW Zine Two's acknowledgements page by October 20th here: https://forms.gle/Yuumo5hydL31miye6

Thank you all so much for the patience as always and I'll see you guys soon with the camping smut😎

Comments (40)

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Danyell Jones · October 1, 2023

I love the end!!!!

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PixelatedLove (。♡‿♡。) · September 29, 2023

Ugh 😣 Im not patient enough for this. . I hate this for them. I hope they can both get off their trains and meet up.

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persophonebae · September 29, 2023

The ANGST. I CANNOT

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persophonebae · September 29, 2023

WHATTTT THIS IS AN ILLEGAL CLIFFHANGER 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

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TheRealSnickers · September 27, 2023

My brain keeps screaming "show him the phone goddamit! Do it! Do it now before the train starts moving!" Gah, my screams will go unheard and into the endless void of anxiousness

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Lannah M. · September 27, 2023

I am waiting PATIENTLY for the next chapter. I am waiting.... SO PATIENTLY...... ahhhhHHHH I need them to reconnect SO BAD

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Alexis Zoumberis · September 27, 2023

Andrew looked so freaking SHARP in that outfit 😭 Nathan…you’re going to have to RREEEAAAALLLYYY make it up to boyfriend.

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TAC · September 26, 2023

Your drawing of dejected Andrew communicated his feeling so clearly!

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PixelatedLove (。♡‿♡。) · September 29, 2023

Yes, I agree. He just looks so down that u can so clearly read the emotion on his face. Poor baby 😞

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Love · September 26, 2023

The anxiety 😫

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shebe96@live.com · September 26, 2023

IM SO DEAD!!!

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Michelle Watson · September 26, 2023

OMG! I just want to uuuhhhgg! *Me put my hands on author’s shoulders, shake them back and forward aggressively🫨 and screams “WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS TO US, STOP TORTURING US.”🥲. I just want to see them together and happy. But I will wait obediently😇.

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Samaruo · September 26, 2023

I will reiterate my comment from last chapter… #paintrain😭😭😭 Here’s to hoping it’s a short ride to clear the misunderstanding and we can finally see our boys get a date 😭✨✨✨✨✨✨✨

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Melon · September 26, 2023

Hahaha amazing episode

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The Book Queer-y · September 26, 2023

*in Darth Vader voice* NNNNOOOOOOOOO

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ticeratops · September 26, 2023

WHAT😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

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Wezzleh · September 26, 2023

JUIIIIIIII 😭😭😭 Andrew I s2g if you don’t break down the train door now, imma jump in and hit the emergency strip on both damn trains so you both get off the train. GO TALK TO YOUR MANS NATHAN!!! RUNNNN

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Kiki · September 26, 2023

Ahaha😭 nonono you can't do this 😭 I mean it's good that he knows that he is at the wrong location but 😭 it's heartbreaking to see them so sad. I like how it feels that even though Nathan is in a train full of people he is "alone" at that moment - especially with the big city and "darkness" in the background. And on the other side Andrew who looks so lonely in that restaurant ( the waitress is probably feeling just as sad as everyone 😭) and he looks sooo sad 😭 like a puppy you put outside while it's raining! Please just give the man a big hug! And the spiral he is going down is so relatable. Lol in that one panel where the advertisement says "I hope" I was like "Yeah me too! I hope they run into each other!!". And I was hoping he would look up from his phone! I wouldn't have survived if one didn't see the other 😭 The whole scenario from both of their perspectives, Nathan wishing time would stop and the end where it probably did stop for them for a moment (and also feels like it from the outside) - that was great! And I love how you divided them and showing their parallel paths by using your Title right in the middle of the chapter! The movie feeling is on point. Thank you Jui and your Team for the great chapter 💜! And the background work is awesome as always 😍 it feels really nice reading through it.

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Jui · September 26, 2023

Gahhhh it means so much that you noticed the title being placed in the middle!!! I’m glad it did what it did even if by a little✍️❤️

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Charliie Kreitzer · September 26, 2023

I want to hug Andrew so much 😭😭 You'll get together my loves ❤️

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Ugh1ife · September 26, 2023

WAHHHHHH

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VioletDash · September 26, 2023

Noooo Andrew baby he desperately trying to get to you 😭 god I hope with that train part and they saw each other we get their reprieve pllleeeeeaasse your not a nuisance he likes you so much Andrew his phone is busted 😭🥺

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Tamika · September 26, 2023

😭😭😭 why you two stupid trains are keeping them apart we need them to be together! 💔

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MegHatter · September 26, 2023

Nooo. I dont want Andrew to be sad.

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Moon Kissed Magicks/SRGeorge Writing · September 26, 2023

Noooooooo 🥺

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Janoha Novella · September 26, 2023

Daaaang... IN A WAY, we're touching on that "fate" conversation some chapters back.

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sekacecir · September 26, 2023

Noooo why u do this to us Jui 🤧🤧🤧🥲🥲🥲🥺🥺

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julia sanchez · September 26, 2023

His little sad face broke my heart 💔😭

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des · September 26, 2023

NOOOOOO can they both get off the trains in time!!!

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Jo · September 26, 2023

Noooo! Not them seeing each other going in opposite directions! 😭

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Fibber Fox · September 26, 2023

The gap of misunderstandings is only as wide as the space between 2 subway trains.

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Jui · September 26, 2023

So so close!

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Logan Morace · September 26, 2023

TEASING ME FR FR

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Kat V · September 26, 2023

Next chapter right now please and thank you.

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Kat V · September 26, 2023

I always read these chapters waaay to fast. 😢

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Reina J. Ruiz · September 26, 2023

Your subway scenes just do justice representing NYC I love it so much, but that last scene 😭😭😭😭

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Jui · September 26, 2023

Idk if it’s just me missing drawing them on transportation but gah the subway scenes make me happy💕

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Apratha101 · September 26, 2023

YOU CANNOT DO THIS TO THEM OR TO US MANNNNN😭😭😭😭

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Jui · September 26, 2023

💕💕

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Maddi Willis · September 26, 2023

My heart 😭❤️