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October 4, 2024

Changing title of Dark Heaven. Need some insight

Guys what sounds better in your opinion?

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Josh Holler · October 4, 2024

There are way too many stories with ‘cultivation’ in the main title or primary focus and they all get pretty boring/repetitive as they never seem to end. I know this series is a lead in to another so you won’t have that problem but I’d recommend avoiding the direct link in the title/name, even if the story involves some of it

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Flick1034 · October 4, 2024

Wasn't he a reincarnator

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Twin Stars Books (HIKARU GENJI/ADAM KING) · October 4, 2024

Changed many things. Will post the first chapter for you guys to see today

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Golden Rhea · October 4, 2024

I think i remember you calling him a doctor in his past life? So if you want a more humorous tone, it could be something like A Doctor’s Guide to Cultivation

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Golden Rhea · October 4, 2024

I was reading it while you were releasing them, but honestly you only covered the tiniest part of him being a kid. I have no actual idea of what the story is going to be about. If it’s a pure Xianxia I’d say cultivation. If he’s power hungry though, I’d say immortality. I just literally don’t know anything about the main character besides wanting to do two paths at once

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Twin Stars Books (HIKARU GENJI/ADAM KING) · October 4, 2024

Yeah the story is completely revamped. Basically see all the 7 previous chapters I posted? Imagine it was his first run and he reached Bad ending. So now he regressed. This will help me increase the pace. Also have an older mc. Since he will come back to when he was 17. One year away from His Blood awakening (Decided to change age of BA from 15 to 18.)

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Draconic Deus · October 4, 2024

Or in short TRoTPMSDDHWmUDFSNRaRMToTCS

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Draconic Deus · October 4, 2024

I Propose The Rebirth of the Peerless Martial Sovereign: Creating a Dark Heaven with My Unrivaled Divine Fist, Surpassing the Nine Realms, and Reclaiming My Throne of the Celestial Sect

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Twin Stars Books (HIKARU GENJI/ADAM KING) · October 4, 2024

😂