About Lustful Paradise
What would you guys think if I tweaked Lustful Paradise and made it in a Original story with my own twist?
Honestly I think Lustful paradise is unique enough. Just a random thought Honestly
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For me if you keep Basara's temperament, his calmness, romantic side, and his logical brain I am all for it. Main reason I like Sol, and Adam so much. I don't care if it is weak to strong, or Strong to F-Off ant I am happy. As long as I have me a Shuri/Chisato for me I am content.
Hehe then let's go. This will be an interesting experience
Go for it I think it would be interesting
So about LP: make it an Original, if you want to proceed writing that story. It's the best middle-ground you can have for the audience and your own interests. Now you asked about LP, but let's talk about Gojo. Gojo is I think like 80-85% done and we are near the showdown with Aizen. I hope you are gonna end the story, because I got some metaphorical blue balls from it and it's the story that brought me to your writing. There are a few things that kinda got forgotten/glossed over in the fic. What happened to Nanao? Like Gojo and her became a thing, after she found out he was from another world and a curse sorcerer. Then we got some relationship stuff, but her whole Deal - the generational curse - kinda got lost in the aether and so did she after the timeskip. Rangiku was done dirty by you ngl. I mean you teased multiple times that there is a will they won't they, but we never really explored her character all that much and she is the only FML with almost no screen time. So justice for Rangiku. You broke tradition and your own rule, when you skipped the Unohana smut. Not cool. Anyway, one more thing. This may be just my perception, but you seemed to be rushing to come to a conclusion and finish the book after the timeskip. I understand that you wanted to finish the story so you could focus on the stories that pay your rent, but it feels a bit unjust to the characters and story to rush too much. So yeah, LP to original and Gojo ending and maybe adding a bit to the last arc already written
Actually that could very really interesting. You can take some inspiration from the anime and make a new world. I don't remember the exact storyline of Lustful Paradise anymore but its a mix of DXD and Demigod something anime right? Seems right up your alley. It's Mythology after all
Yeah. It’s a mix between DxD and Testament of devil sisters and yeah you know me. Mythology are always my favorite things.
Wouldn’t expect it to be 1:1 it’s got to be original right so it would be natural to add some/a lot of flair and even change up the story a bit to how you feel things should go but like if everything you put into the fanfic originally was used to inspire a new original story than I say it would end up being an amazing story
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I would say go for it I enjoyed the story so if you completing it means making it an original then I’m all for it
Thanks though to be clear it wouldn't be a 1:1 with just different names. For one that would be really shitty as an author and two a fanfic have base that an original dont. Anyway this is not a main project now. Adding a new story when I can barely handle my current ones would be irresponsible
Gotcha, makes sense
The DXD fanfiction? I sincerly never read it, but a slice of life your still should be fun
Mhm I have so many many ideas lol. I simply don't have the time. Juggling SHK and CF is already draining enough. There is also MP(GoC) that I have to support.
Why not continue the fanfic series’?
I could give you many reasons but if I have to be honest the reality is that it's not financially sustainable for me. Any time I invest in a fanfic could be invested in an original story I would have full copyright on. Fanfic can definitely bring good revenue but I am not getting younger and in a few years I might start thinking about building a family