Update 12/4/24
I thought I had it in me to do another chapter tonight, but by the time I got done doing cooking and helping with homework and all that, there just isn't enough gas in the tank. I started but sometimes, I can just feel it's gonna be like pulling teeth- so sleep and then reset for tomorrow.
As for tomorrow- I got back the edited version of Crystal Core 5- but there are a couple of things that I have to do with it. So tomorrow morning will likely be spent working on that. I have to upload it to Amazon tomorrow.
After that I'll be back at writing Control- and next up is Interlude 1.
Since I'm taking tonight to reset- are there any perspectives that you are especially wanting to see in either this interlude or one later in the book?
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I am currently reading contention and am wondering why the MC has never used his Karmic Resurrection ability. Not once. So many people have died that he could have saved. This oversight is frustrating. Just my two cents.
So far so good. Is there no way, with the system mediator title, MC. can't figure out where incursion sites will be? Maybe not when but where? His terakinesis and building skills could offset the debuffs they get. It wouldn't stop incursions sites from forming, just game the system init helping earth.
Samvek as he's overseeing the defense of the HQ. I'd love to see Scratch get a short scene just showing his thoughts on Silas and his bodyguard assignment. I also think a scene showing how the English royals are handling the induction would be cool.
Back at the Clan hq and their leadership hot take on earth. Adventurers guild person queued up for posting to earth and first guild building. I forget the name but the Thumper, her view of the incursions, and direction fwd. The President/General as they/he helps find minions, err... delegates for Silas and follows the world affairs via satellite. A new southern hemisphere up and comer, perhaps female, perhaps amazon or kenya/south African or rugby and nz... someone that is a local stabilizing force and can grow into a regional or continent force. Maybe she surfs and kills aquatic monsters... Not for nothing, how about the British royalty perspective. Or an Engineer working on a bridge/wall/tunnel/skyscraper. Who starts gaining classes and levels fast with the blueprints becoming a mostly construction type with a ljttle combat. Like the USA Sea Bees. A boat person Vietnam or Indonesia who gets a beast control class and it's all fish and crustaceans and oooh leviathan at some point. Maybe again a Navy tie in. Also, romance. Love that Silas has found love at the end of it all, what about his mom, sister, mentor from the clan, scratch, ... a little romance goes a long way towards character building. Love the book. Ty for the opportunity for feedback.
Lol that's life I'm doing a dual masters degree program and sometimes just to write a paper I have to take a break, because I know if I try to write when I'm really not feeling it, it's not going to be a great paper lol 😆
gah, and you signed up for that torture. Law school was no fun, but at least I wasn't doing two degrees at once.