Revenge Page149
Revenge runs in the family
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I also realized that the secretary wasn't endowed with boobs as a result of her weight gain. Is it that she's someone whose fat goes to her hips and belly and not so much to her boobs?
I also saw this is the first time the story mentions sex. You have characters talk about being sexy and drawing them to be alluring, and show Cass crushing on Lexi, and have had will they won't they moments, but you've never mentioned sex in the story. This is alluded to with Cass's parents since how else was cass conceived? You finally mention sex for the first time, with Cindy mentioning her ex-husband sleeping with his secretary. I wonder if you'll allude to sex later on in the story. I am not asking to show explicit stuff, just mentions here and there towards it.
I see Revenge Waddles in the family ;) Loved these flashbacks! Some great depth to Cindy and Cass, and always lovely art despite the suddenly serious turn of events. Neat to see a callback to earlier pages in the story, and I think this is a fabulous way of giving Cass an introduction to magical baking. And you do male wg just as well as with the lasses! Love that Lexi both gets justifiably upset over the story, and doesn't bat an eye at the reveal of Cindy's food being magic either- she seems to be getting used to this! And these panels are particularly well-composed too, especially the intro and secretary feeding- seriously cool stuff. I'd quite genuinely buy a hardcover version of Revenge when it's all said and done one day!
I also caught Cass blushing. I wonder if it's over Lexi or her mom telling the story or both.
I am continuing to see your writing improving as you explain what made Cindy gain weight, why her husband left her and what she did to him cheating on her. Simon cheating on her is a nice addition as it shows what someone would do when their spouse doesn't accept their appearance and him getting his comeuppance is a nice addition too. I now wonder what happened to his secretary and him after gaining weight. Guess we'll have to wait and see
I now wonder if like Lexi, he tries and fails to lose weight.
This story is so damn good! I love how this is going and how this backstory ties up loose ends!
Like how cass was able to learn the spell to fatten up lexi?
Ah! Fat flashback! 🤩