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I wonder if I would call revenge a porn with plot comic. I know there's a loooooong debate about what exactly is porn. For simplicity's sake, let's call porn material intentionally meant to be sexually enticing and it can range from cheesecakey sexually enticing art (like bikini/lingerie pics) where at most we see nudity to hardcore explicit stuff that is very NSFW. I wonder if you would call Revenge porn under this definition. If so, I wonder if you would call revenge porn with plot. If you didn't have a plot, then you wouldn't build up lexi and cass's relationship, you wouldn't have lexi go through character development, you wouldn't have cass's feelings towards Lexi change, and you wouldn't give a backstory for Cindy. I feel if you wanted to just make porn, you would've had Cass and lexi make out several times, have multiple bikini beach scenes and lingerie pillow fights, throw them into sexy scenarios with no build up, and possibly have Lexi make out with cindy and/or her sisters if you didn't take the plot seriously. While you are making sexually enticing material, you're at least competent with your plot and characters and try to work in sexy moments when the plot calls for it .

Delightful backstory! I like Cindy evermore with every little thing we learn, and the pregnancy cravings was a great touch :D Excited to see the siblings someday too, Thanksgiving is gonna be one full table!

I absolutely love how your story has a sense of realism to it! It makes it a lot more interesting! Great job!

I now hope to see the rest of Cindy's sisters and know their names and personalities

Thanks for posting this! I am curious to see what Simon did next and how similar he is to John (Lexi's dad).