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I absolutely love the way this story has gone in the development of Lexi as a character. That's where I feel this comic stands above all others in the realistic tension and also how the characters feel and look. This is a great job and keep it up!

If there was a Top Ten WG Comic Villains list, this right piece of stale margarine-covered sandpaper would be at the top. I love the layout you use in the middle, where Lexi's bombarded on all sides by her father's demands- like a prison slowly trying to box her in. The lil speedlines and zoomed-in closeup is a great way of presenting it, and I can almost hear the accompanying menacing music. The Weight-Loss March, perhaps. But then, for a glorious moment, she breaks free- literally putting her foot down, hair flying back as if she's damn near going Super-Saiyan, and she roars her defiance! She's finally said it, finally breathed what she's only ever privately thought- and I'm all but cheering at my desk to see it. Cass is gonna have to pull some spycraft to bust Lexi out, let alone grab some of her stuff- but then again, squeezing her into a black catsuit for the job would be quite fun...

I wonder if Lexi's escape attempt should be after class or during extracurricular activites and to live with cass from that point on. Though it's hard because no phone and not much to get from home. I suppose Lexi could run out at night and nab her phone from her dad. I have another thought, maybe lexi should have cass cast the weight gain spell on her parents, have them gain weight and know what it's like to be fat

Saw this coming!

I feel like move in day is coming!!

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