VAMPIRE PICKUP LINES? š¬Please help
Hey friends! I'm finishing up my chocolate vampires video today and I'm getting a little carried away š I'm trying to make a silly dating sim demo at the end like I did with my werewolf video a few years ago.
Here's where you come in: I really want to have silly little intro pickup lines for each of the characters at the end (no voice acting or anything, just text like you'd have in a lot of dating sims) and I'm sure most of you are much better dialog writers than I am!
If you have any ideas for short quippy one-liners for the characters leave them below and I'll credit the ones I choose at the end of the video! I'm looking for a super short way each vampire would introduce themselves too/hit on the player character.
The premise for the setting is that each character is a vampire, works at a vampire bar/club/speakeasy, and is infatuated with you (the player) their human co-worker. You can choose to romance one of them or multiples, but if they get rejected they may eat you. Here's some personality info on the characters (left to right) to give you an idea of their vibe:
Chocolate Truffle: Oberon
Occupation: Bartender
Pros: Smooth, witty, easy to talk to, approachable, charming, wise
Cons: Snobby, will mansplain alcohol to you/judge you for your taste, stubborn, a little too independent, a little too emo/ philosophical/depressing
Ambivert
Mint Chocolate: Beatrix
Occupation: Owner
Pros: Intelligent, conversational, layered, experienced, mysterious/intriguing, deep
Cons: Condescending, brash, a bit of a know it all, insensitive, strict
Introvert
Salted Caramel Chocolate: Daphne
Occupation: Singer/dancer/performer
Pros: Confident, seductive, sweet-talking, complimentary, fun/outgoing, bubbly
Cons: Wants to be the center of attention, a bit dramatic, will gossip about you, very sensitive/will get jealous, most likely to murder for you for rejecting her
Extrovert
White Chocolate: Lacy
Occupation: Hostess
Pros: Friendly, complimentary, warm, charming, genuine
Cons: Nosy, trying too hard to be your friend, uptight, anxious, low self-awareness, judgmental
Extrovert
Raspberry Chocolate: Roxie
Occupation: Bouncer/Security
Pros: Cool, capable, loyal, unbothered/easy going, bold, self-assured, unapologetic, strong
Cons: Deadpan, avoidant, prone to boredom, can be a troublemaker to entertain herself, a little lazy
Introvert
Orange Chocolate: Sylvester
Occupation: Musician/performer
Pros: Passionate, artistic, captivating, multifaceted, funny, personable, optimistic
Cons: A little insecure, naive, self-absorbed, inattentive, shy, un-focused, un-serious
Ambivert
š„Bonus points: what should we call the vampire bar? (I may have also drawn the interior of that...)
Thanks for any suggestions you can give me! š
Comments (16)
āA full bodied red? Thatās my favourite drink too.ā āBaby you are looking fang-tastic tonightā āBatting your lashes at me? Ha. Amateur.ā(Turns into bat) āMake you a Bloody Mary? Well if you insistā¦ā āAt my joint, mocktails arenāt the only virgins on the menu.ā
Are you B positive? (Or whatever blood type) Cuz youāre just my type
- Vampire Bar Names: The High Stakes The Blood Moon - Pick Up Lines āSugar, youāre simply enthralling.ā Oberon - āQuite the adventuresome individual are we? I could take you on a flight youāll never forget.ā āThereās no one like you, youāre my vein girl.ā (vein instead of main, Iām so sorry) Sylvester ā āCare to make some music of the night with me?ā āYouāre simply a-ortinary.ā (ā¦aortaā¦aortinaryā¦) āAre you the evening/morning? Because I undergo a complete transformation when youāre around.ā āYou make my heart crawl lizard-like down the walls.ā
Love High Stakes! Second this one. Awesome pun @knitting_dragon
eyes can't be mirrors into soul because I can really see myself in you
You're so sweet. I could just eat you up.
- āIāll take my stakes with you my dearā. - āYouāre quite the fang-tastic, individual.ā The bar could be called āthe Crimson Dameā or the āCarmillaās Suiteā
So cute! For bar names, could be: Music of the Night Hysteria (vamps often being associated with mass hysteria throughout history) The Colony or The Cauldron (names for groups of bats) Pillagers (idk, I just love Nandor) The Red Mill (play on the famous Green Mill speakeasy... because vamps have to be invited in lol) Or 21 Centuries Club (21 Club another famous speakeasy) Velvet Underground (too obvious?) (Could also be Red Velvet or Black Velvet) Lollipops (as in suckers... I'm so sorry) ā¤ļøā¤ļøā¤ļø
Hey sweetie, did you like my last performance? I could give you a private show if you like.
I'll forgive you for your taste in drinks... if you give me a a taste later tonight. I have a feeling you're delicious in more ways than one...
Are you grain because I stop to look at you every time
For the names of the bar could be, Bottle of Nosferatu,or Phantom of moonshine?
Are you AB-negative? Because just like the rarest of them all, your beauty is universally admired but impossible to find twice.
For a name to give the bar, you could try a play on words, like the "Coff-Inn" kind of thing perhaps :)
"You're cute enough to bite."
You might be O negative but I feel real positive about you
