December 14, 2023

Changed the text in the last 2 comic chapters.

The dialogue for the two latest Domino Effect chapters has been changed, in particular the dialogue for Nikolai, as it portrays his behaviour in a manner that conflicts with the tone I originally wished to convey. I hope that these new revisions will present the chapters in a manner more accurate to how I wanted Nikolai to be perceived!


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Comments (6)

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John Satterwhite · December 15, 2023

Ah yeah, I like this way better. I was Massimo D'Alema reaction memeing to the originals XD

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Belt's Dining hall · December 16, 2023

lol

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T. Clark · December 14, 2023

I really like the changes, it's much more in character for him to just go full feral

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Belt's Dining hall · December 15, 2023

yea, which was my original intention. The first version didn't fit at all what I was going for, so yea. lol.

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mark · December 14, 2023

rip evil nikolai

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jlixirium · December 14, 2023

I very much appreciate that, Belt! ☺️ the original text was a bit triggering for me, as someone who has experienced sexual assault in their life.