Hilda in The Castelia City.
투희입니다.
Hilda this time.
예전의 제 투박한 그림 스타일로 그려보고 싶었습니다.
텍스트에 대한 욕망은 줄어들 질 않네요. 😈
이번에도 긴 텍스트를 싫어하시는 분들도 즐기실 수 있도록
나레이션 부분은 따로 페이지를 나눴습니다.
I wanted to try drawing again in my older, rougher art style.
My desire to write long text just doesn’t seem to go away. 😈
For those who don’t enjoy lengthy narration,
I’ve separated the narration into its own pages again this time.
사실 가끔은 차라리 이럴 거면 nsfw 라이트 노벨을 만들어볼까... 라는 생각도 듭니다. 🙄💦
Honestly, sometimes I wonder…
at this point, should I just make an NSFW light novel instead? 🙄💦
감사합니다 Thank you!
Comments (2)
Yeah... this one seemed lengthier than usual for you in terms of dialgoue added. Honestly the art isn't bad (not a fan of the Roast Beef sandwich of a pussy you gave Hilda), but it feels like it was made around the idea of the dialogue/scenario and not the other way around. If you ever feel like you are adding too much dialogue I would stuck to the "Rule of 3," where you have at maximum 3 small narration text boxes for any details you want to add to the world building. Then you rely on what you've drawn to imply certain other things. Hilda's used up pussy already tells the viewer that she's been fucked hard for what could be weeks if not months. Think of it as adding toppings to flavored ice cream: you got the flavor of ice cream that you want and the option to add as many toppings and how much to that flavor, then you enjoy.
What a vulgar and thick looking pussy, this rougher look is really erotic! Personally I love how you describe and expand on the details in the situations thru text and the truly dark things that you come up with stimulate the right part of my brain😈. If you wanted to try and make an erotic novel I would love to read it! Thanks for your great work and good luck on whatever you try next!❤️