Feedback box 馃構
Hi guys, how are you, I hope you are doing well. Well, it's been a while since I've created a Feedback post, it's good from time to time to read your comments, criticisms and suggestions, it helps to know how I'm doing, and it makes the novel grow. So I've created this post to read your comments. I want to know how you think the novel is going, what things you like, what things you don't like, what things you would change, and what things you would add, I want to know what you think 馃, even if it's just a small suggestion I would like to read it, thank you guys very much for your time. I love you, a hug 馃槉
PS: I forgot... 馃う鈥嶁檪锔廔 also wanted to ask you what you thought about the translation of Chapter 3, since it was translated by a different person, I wanted to know your opinion about it.
Comments (6)
I miss my favorite top, Usher. Does he sleep naked, too? What happens when Bennett catches a glimpse? Can he resist?
I think Percival (Jeff's father) owes us a beer or something.
Hola, Luriel, yes, you are a kind of hero, when splitting the story into two branches :-) Perhaps it will be possible to merge them back together after several months of progress. You also complicated the situation yourselve when offering 4 soldiers as sex-partners to MC. It is very nice of you, but I think next time two options will be enough and you can go more quickly forward with the story. Gracias por todo y guardate bien! Un abrazo :-)
Hi Pilgrim, yes indeed the work is quadrupling with the new love stories 馃榿, but the truth is that many were asking to be able to have love relationships with some characters. I haven't decided yet, but maybe by the end of this season the two stories will come together.
Translation is much better. Walkthrough is very good, as I was getting very frustrated. My only complaint is that the story is not progressing enough. You don鈥檛 need more graphics, but you do need more story.
Thanks Uman, yes, I'm trying to make the chapters a bit longer so I can cover a bit more of the story I have in mind, but it really is one of the things that is taking me the longest, and now the story has split in two, but I think in the next few months you will see an increase in the amount of story that each chapter will take. Hugs