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Hi guys, how are you?! I wanted to ask you, how do you think the novel is going, I would like to read your comments, opinions and suggestions, what things you like and which do not, what you would like to add or what things you would get. As I always tell you, Feedback is very important hahaha. It's been 7 Chapters since I started this project and I'm very happy with how it goes 馃挀, but it's always good to read your comments and suggestions. For me it is very important that you enjoy the novel, and nothing better than asking yourself 馃槉. Of course, I thank you for taking your time to read this post and leave your comments. I also wanted to take this opportunity to let you know, that today I will be publishing the remaining CG Set, and apologize for the delay 馃う, and tomorrow I will be publishing the poll for the CG Set this month. Without more, I want to thank you for all your support and leave you a huge hug 馃挐.
Comments (7)
My dude I'm always just happy with what you put out :) It's obvious you try very hard and it doesn't go unnoticed. I can agree that maybe ch. 7 was a little straight forward, but I also think the only reason it stuck out so much is chapter 6 had so many different options, that in comparison it was super different. It was still a great chapter! Good work :)
I agree with Pilgrim, but this is mostly a complain about last update. Chapter 7 was too straightforward and with less plot - even for the sex scenes. We had 4 scenes, but those were only 2 in fact - Bennet with Arzhu and Bennet with Conrad, the only change was top and bottom. I felt last update lacked something more. We didn't have many options to choose and change the course of the history. But I guess that happens because great changes are coming next, with Bennet new job. Anyway, I really like your work and your characters are awesome. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Hi Alex, yes, you are absolutely right, Chapter 7 lacked a little more development to achieve the level that the other chapters had been having, I recognize that between the move and my work I could not devote all the time I had to. But in chapter 8 we will return to the same level as always, in terms of history and new things that this chapter will bring this month, and of course, I thank you for your comment Axel, thank you very much. Hug
Hi, Luriel, you know, I little wander if the story is not loosing its strength a logic, as well as Bennets character. Exactly as Conrad have said, during one week Bennet has changed a lot and now it seems that everything happens only to have sex with every guy around. Everybody likes hot guys and sexy scenes, I do not complain, and I also know, that to write good story and characters it is not easy. But you asked for opinion, so here is mine :-) Please, continue with your work - wish you many good ideas and time for their realisation :-)
Hi Pilgrim, thanks with all my heart for your opinion, for me it is very important, and yes, you are absolutely right in what you say, every month I fight with the same, make a more credible story and less sex or something more fictional and more sex scenes, and yes, it is very difficult to create a good balance between the two things, but I will try to improve in that aspect. Thank you very much for taking the time to leave your opinion, a hug.
I'm enjoying the game so far, and the minigames are fun too. As far as feedback goes, I think the sex scenes are great, but maybe some characters can have different preferences for what they enjoy during sex. Like one character can really like rimming so their scenes have more of that, another can like blowjobs a lot so he has more of those. This way the characters could become more unique and different from each other not only in personality but in sex as well. This is just a suggestion though, I think the game is going well anyway without this. Keep up the good work! :)
Hello Roguerery, yes I am thinking of creating a section in the game, where the sexual preferences and tastes of each character are archived, and create the sexual scenarios based on that. Soon I will publish something on the subject, to know how you would like it to work. And thank you for taking the time to leave your opinion. Hug