Suggestions and comments
Hi guys, how are you ?. I wanted to leave this post open, for suggestions and comments, I think that after 4 Chapters, you already have an opinion about the novel, and I want to know that you would add or remove it from the novel, or that you would change, or directly that you don't like it of the novel, in any aspect: images, voices, sounds, dialogues, etc. I hope to read them soon. Thanks for playing the novel and I leave a hug to everyone 馃槡
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Comments (10)
So this is just a suggestion, but I wonder if Bennett could have a brother who moved away from home and now comes back? I know that most players would not be interested in that, it's just my personal suggestion of course. I'm enjoying the game a lot so keep up the good work! :)
Hi Rogueremy, before starting the novel, when it was just a piece of paper, I had that idea in mind, it may happen in the future, I think that the novel can be played from the point of view of several characters at the same time , and not just Bennett, if so, his "lost brother" would be an option. Hugs
I love it. The plot is interesting and I like to see character's progression. Most adult games lack it - they just throw different hot CGs on your at most depended on your last choice, and that's it. In your game I can associate myself with the MC. He has personality and he's changing over time passing all those difficult situations. He even has time to reflect and doubt in his actions or feelings, but not too much, not turning it into a soap opera/drama. That's very nice you found this balance. I can't wait to see more, what the story brings. Keep some options open for the MC - like, keep meeting with that girl even if her father is against it, or meet some other girl as well, so bi-sexual player will be happy, I think) Or maybe even add some weird m/m/f scene) I also like fantasy plots, when it's about medieval times. So, having witches, demons, monsters there would be cool.
Thanks for the comments Artem, yes, I think about the not too distant future, add a wizard to the plot, I want the novel to have some magic in the story. Hugs
I'm pretty happy with the way things are progressing, although I hope we get to teach that scumbag Tarik a lesson 馃槨. I'd love to see more of the Orc village with Amok and Tabra (and have some fun there), as it looks like the werewolf plot might take us there in some routes. I really like you've got diverging paths in the game now with different love interests, it adds lots of replay value for me. 馃憤 If I could have anything, I'd wish for an Amok romance route and to see Usher getting it on with some of the other characters (big hairy dudes are my favourite)! 馃槏
Hi Jordan, as for Wendy's plot, I already finished in the last chapter, I don't think he will be mentioned again hahaha, I have realized, that he is not very dear to the public 馃槃. Thanks for the comment, Hugs.
If I could change anything, then I would remove all those talks about Wendy being the true love of his life there was just too much of it 馃槄 also... I would like a option to romance (bang) Amok without him killing me afterward 馃樁 also... Do you plan to add some romance options that looks more like that jailor? 馃槄 because I think he's the only one with Amok, that you can bang that doesn't look very girly like Taylor, Jef, or the Prince. (You can only date girly boys, but I would love to romance some men more 馃樁 only ones that looks manly is Jailor that raped me, so I don't think there will be any romance happening and Amok killed me, so no romancing this hunk either... Please give us more variety 馃槉 I love your game and these are just suggestions, I'll be playing whatever 馃挄
Hi Maul, thank you very much for the suggestion of adding some more manly character, I think that in the next few days, you will have more news about it 馃榿. Hug
Hi, Luriel, I love to have more options and unpredictable shifts in the story. This is very valuable, but it can be difficult to keep consequently through all the story-versions together. I only remind you about the death of Conrad. Benneth feels guilty and says he killed him even in case he did not! I hope this is not any spoiler, however this can be a chance of some versions of the story to bring Conrad again to the play. :-)) Stay well!
Hi Pilgrim, yes, last month I had a hard time keeping all the stories well delimited and in a coherent way, but this month luckily I was able to find a program that allows me to keep visible all the plots of the novel, while I am writing it, and everything very organized, this will allow me to avoid mistakes like the one in the last chapter, thank you very much for the comments. Hug