Double Dare Sketch animation [SC_01-50]
Yo! I have something to show you here UwU Did some sketch animations for the Double Dare!
Last time some of you told me that I have a lot of issues in the text (no doubt, im not a native English speaking person ><) and so I've chaged some of the lines. I will probably change them more later but let me know if there are any big misakes or issues in the text!
I was so pissed when I tend to change "as for me" to "to me" omgggg
I mean in Russian I wanted to make it a bit different emotion here which I cant physycally make in English aaaaaaaaaaaa xD Its so funny how different languages may provide different emotions with the same meaning phrases!!
Btw the work is in full swing! This month I was fully on my temp setup so it slowed down a bit but im going to my main soon! Animatic is in attach!
Comments (18)
very nice and I can't believe elisabeth hasn't had a pregnancy scare with ronin yet
Damn this is gonna be masterpiece! Btw I have a question. There is "KOT" on his shirt, is Eipril from Poland? Because kot its cat in polish.
Honestly you're doing really great though, even if you were a native speaker of English. The number of oddities in even your rough draft was like...1. Maybe 2. I couldn't do that, lol.
Liz and Rou are so heckin adorable!!! <3
Hype is Here
Yeah, going over the writting in general for editing can sometimes be a pain in the ass. I know this all too well as someone who's done a ton of writting. I aslo know very well what it's like when helping someone where English is not the mother language they're used to. But yes, words can sound the same, look the same, but mean totally different things. However, I can certainly provide my services for free while helping by checking over this and seeing if there are any sentiences or words that need changing. other than that, I can't wait to fully see this finished as Rou and Liz are a golden standard couple. Just from the first few seconds I can see how much this has gotten better from the rough preview.
It's so adorable, I love those two.
You misspelt "promise"!
Looking really good! And I love Liz and Rou so much!
I now want to see a beach animation with them!
Can't wait for the full colourised and complete Animation 🥰😍
you are soso talented ~w~
Really enjoying the expressive ear movements in this one. …among everything else. Could watch Liz climb a ladder forever.
Yes English is a cunt even as a native speaker of it I still fuck it up
Yeah English is a pain. And I'm a native speaker... You're dong great Eipril. And we only correct your English cause we care.❤️
100% behind this animation
Excelente progreso cada vez, la versión final quedar excelente cuidate y saludos UwU 🦊😛
Aww~ so cute 😍