OL2: Colorful Class Script Preview (Step 1)
Look at all those cute little alterations for heading towards school on a typical day. And that's not even all of them, you can also be running there and going without Tamarack and/or Qiu.
This is the reason things take so long writing this game. You take a concept as simple as "going to class", something that could be described in a couple hundred words or even just a couple sentences if the MC did it in a single way and instead you have to write over 2,000 words before the real event can even begin. But that's also one of the reasons it's fun to play 😌
Pure Text:
if early with qiu and not running:
qiu “We’re gonna beat everybody today, maybe even Mrs. Murray!”
if praising/admiring and not silent:
mc “Maybe. Why not? She’s the teacher, but you’re practically the president of this class.”
qiu “Thanks, [first_name].”
if silent praising/admiring:
“You nodded along. Why not? She was the teacher, but Qiu was practically the president of the class.”
if teasing and not silent:
mc “If you put it that way, Tamarack might start going ahead of us for a change.”
qiu “I bet you’re right.”
“You shared a stifled snicker in the checkered hall.”
if teasing and silent:
“If Qiu put it that way to Tamarack, she might start going ahead of you for a change.”
“You stifled a snicker in the checkered hall.”
if teamworking/accepting and not silent:
mc “Yeah.”
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if on time with qiu and tamarack:
qiu “We have gotta be the coolest crew in class. I bet everyone is waiting for us to arrive.”
tam “Yeah!”
if praising/admiring and not silent:
mc “If they’re not, they should be.”
qiu “Exactly.”
if silent praising/admiring:
“If they’re not, they should be. [Qiu was/Tamarack was/Qiu and Tamarack were] great.”
if teasing and not silent:
mc “Yep. They’re waiting. They wanna know what goofy thing [Qiu is/Tamarack is/you two are] gonna do next.”
tam “It’s more fun being funny.”
“You shared a stifled snicker in the checkered hall.”
if teasing and silent:
“Yep. They probably were waiting. They would wanna know what goofy thing [Qiu was/Tamarack was/those two were] gonna do next.”
“You stifled a snicker in the checkered hall.”
if teamworking/accepting and not silent:
mc “We do stand out.”
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if late with tamarack and not running:
tam “Late, late, late. Me and [first_name] are late. Late today, late tomorrow. You can wait. Late, late, late~”
if praising/admiring and not silent:
mc “That’s a beautiful song, Tamarack.”
tam “Thanks! I made it up.”
if silent praising/admiring:
“What a wonderful song.”
if teasing and not silent:
mc “Oh yeah, I can tell how much you care about breaking the rules.”
“You shared a stifled snicker in the checkered hall.”
if teasing and silent:
“Oh yeah, you could tell how much she cared about breaking the rules. You stifled a snicker in the checkered hall.”
if teamworking/accepting and not silent:
mc “At least it’s not just one of us.”
tam “Yeah!”
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Comments (11)
what app do you use to write on? i like the font
I use Word Docs but changed my default font to Verdana!
It's so wonderful to see all the different ways this could play out. You work so hard, GB Patch!! 💖💖💖
So cute lol
Im curious, with a MC who has both teasing/admiring is there a system for the game to choose which dialouge happens? is it picked at random or based on previous choices
In this case, being admiring would override teasing! But that's not always how it plays out.
oh looks like we'll can be late for class? 👀 If so, that's fantastic! Nothing makes you closer to your friends than a shared comradery of arriving late together!
All the options and outcomes are reasons I'm drawn to your games and love them so much, so I definitely appreciate all the effort put in and understand that it'll take time to achieve ^^ Keep up the good work!! 💕✨️
it's the little choices like this that make these games so unique and fun 🥹💖
Oooh I'm intrigued ☺️
Ooh, is this for a new Moment? 👀