Seth's family part 1
The part that was cut of the chapter, I don't put it because as I said before it would change the tone of the comic, and I don't want that.
Another reason is because it would distract to the real subject of the episode, that was Seth being finally comfortable enough to tell Miguel.
Feel free to tell me any grammar error.
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You could specify from the beginning that the grandparents that he is talking about are the maternal ones. Just an idea
You're totally right, my bad.
-he REQUIRED a very expensive TREATMENT -Had to sell most of their land *I understand what you mean by "followed bad steps", but I don't think it works in English. Not sure how to say it better, since English isn't my first language either -but BROKE into other houses too (I guess "entered" would work as well, if they didn't lock their doors, but "broke into" implies that he was not only trespassing but also stealing) -My granddad had been PLAYING the lottery FOR 26 years/My granddad had been BUYING lottery TICKETS for 26 years
Thank you so much for your help❤ I changed the "bad steps" for "made bad choices" I hope this way is more clear.
I'm happy to hear Seth's story! Here are some possible corrections: 1. The ELDEST son got sick,... 2. He not only stole FROM his parents ... 3. We spent much more time with our grandparents THAN with them 4. We were ok, bbut that incident MEANT (or CAUSED)...
Thank you so much ❤
Um..which side of the grandparents is he taken custody to? The mother's grandparents or the father's grandparents?
The mother's grandparents
I'm starting to hate his mother. I think it started when she blamed her older brother for getting sick and dying.
And we're only starting : _D