Devlog #2 What did you guys think of v0.3.0?
Hello, you naughty people! š
It's been a few days since the release, so I think it's time for another one of these!
First of all, thank you so much for 50+ members! Seeing you guys join in truly makes me want to keep dumping more and more hot loads of updates for you guys! š
Honestly, it's been a blast working on this filthy game! And even more so knowing there are people out there actually enjoying all the questionable things that come out of my head. š
I'm planning on making one of these devlog posts after every release, so you guys have a place to tell me what you thought about the latest update, what worked, what didn't, and what you'd like to see going forward.
Iāll admit that Chapter 5 ended up a little shorter than Chapters 3 and 4, and it was definitely a bit less focused on the really horny stuff. But I think it works well as a transition chapter for some of the things I have planned next.
And that actually brings me to something I'm particularly curious about...
What did you think about having a little more emotion this time around?
Don't worry, Spermatosis isn't suddenly going to turn into a heartbreaking romantic drama where everyone keeps their pants on. š The horny stuff is still very much the heart (or the throbbing cock) of the game.
But at least when it comes to Brian, Rick, and the MC, I think it's fun to give their relationship some genuine affection and emotional moments alongside all the filth for now.
Being completely honest, I even teared up a little while writing Rick's bedroom scene with the MC. Maybe I'm just getting too attached to these idiots.
And if Chapter 5 didn't quite satisfy your horny needs... the next chapter should make up for it. š I've got plenty planned, so stay tuned.
Just like last time, I have a few questions for you! Feel free to answer one, a few, or all of them:
What was your favorite scene or character interaction in Chapter 5?
How did you feel about the length and pacing? Did the chapter feel too short, just right, or long enough for what it was trying to do?
How did you feel about the emotional moment? Would you like to see that side of the characters occasionally?
Was there enough naughty content for you, or did Chapter 5 leave you blue-balled? š
Was there a particular scene, joke, description, or little detail that stood out to you?
Is there anything you'd like to see more (or less) of in future chapters?
Did you run into any bugs, missing images, awkward dialogue, or anything else that needs fixing?
As always, you absolutely don't have to answer everything. Even one sentence telling me what you likedāor what you didn'tāis genuinely useful to me.
About the next release... š
I'm going to put up another poll soon about the release schedule, and this time I'll keep it simple: every 2ā3 weeks or roughly once a month.
Depending on the result, I'm currently looking at either October 7ā9 or October 21ā22 for the next release.
So when the poll goes up, please give it a vote! If you thought Chapter 5 was a good length and you'd be happy getting updates around that size more frequently, 2ā3 weeks might be your choice. If Chapter 5 felt too short and you'd rather wait longer for a chunkier update, with 2 chapters, monthly releases might make more sense for you.
Ultimately, I want to find a rhythm that gives you guys satisfying updates while also being something I can realistically maintain.
Thanks a bunch for playing, supporting the game, and continuing to share your thoughts with me. Seriously, reading your comments here and on f95 after a release has quickly become one of my favorite parts of making this thing. š
Now it's back to work for me. Liza and Kevin need to choke on some big loads...
May your ropes reach the ceiling! š¦
ā RopeShooter
Comments (6)
What was your favorite scene or character interaction in Chapter 5? It has to be the scene where Rick came to talk to Kevin in the bedroom! It was a great blend of character development and kinky action, and I liked how you set up and segued into the MC's fantasy. Having such a strong reaction to suddenly having two bulky packages shoved in his face showed how much his tastes have shifted over the past few days. I'm so curious to know how Rick and Brian feel about what that last comment as well. One of them definitely had to hear it, right?! Smooching Brian's bone was a close second, though. How did you feel about the length and pacing? Did the chapter feel too short, just right, or long enough for what it was trying to do? I felt it was a good length. How did you feel about the emotional moment? Would you like to see that side of the characters occasionally? This was what sold the scene with Rick as my favorite. It makes sense that Rick would be having a hard time reconciling everything he's feeling in his situation. It gives weight to how different he acts compared to Brian when giving Kevin his "dose." Him being a little goofy here makes it obvious where Brian gets it from, and I love that splash of goofiness in a dominant character. Was there enough naughty content for you, or did Chapter 5 leave you blue-balled? š There was enough although it being mostly fantasy content in Kevin's imagination makes it a bit less exciting to me. To be clear, though, I don't think this needs to be adjusted or anything. I think fantasy scenes are the right choice for this point in the story! Was there a particular scene, joke, description, or little detail that stood out to you? The aforementioned goofiness from Rick, like the smile and the 'weenie' comment, stood out in contrast to how much emotional pain he was in moments before. I like that sense that something is teeming under the surface with each character. For the same reason I like seeing how excited Brian gets when the MC plays with his dick. He's not beating the pup allegations with that sensitive nose and those pleading eyes of his! He does his best to be chill and laid back, but then you'll throw in a detail like how he's looking at the MC with thinly veiled desire in the opening scene. It makes me wonder how close Kevin's fantasy version of him is to what's actually going on in his head. Is there anything you'd like to see more (or less) of in future chapters? I'm not quite sure how to word it but I thought it was hot when the MC kissed Brian's cock before "tucking it in" so to speak. I think it'd be fun to have more scenes where the MC "cares" for it almost as if it was it's own character. It seems like the type of silly game Brian would quickly become enamored with. Did you run into any bugs, missing images, awkward dialogue, or anything else that needs fixing? Nope!
Hey man! Thank you so much for commenting! Since your last input, I was actually waiting for your opinion on this one! It makes me so happy to see someone caring about the game as much as you do so early into it, and seeing every detail that I thoughtfully put into it being noticed gives me even more purpose to keep writing the story this way! About them hearing the comment, noooooo, of course they didnāt hehehe! It makes me so happy when you mention their personalities! I didnāt want the characters to feel one-dimensional. Rick and Brian are very different, but they have so many similarities too⦠Brian is still young. He has his own personality, heās insecure about some things, but he hasnāt lived enough to have any real trauma⦠that makes him able to be carefree! But still, thereās that raw desire inside of him that I want to explore a bit more. Brianās dream version is a little bit of a jackass because I think the MC catches these details in the way Brian sometimes looks at him, and in his imagination, it ends up going to the extreme. I really want to balance that side of him out. Brian is not a jackass like he is in the dream, but who doesnāt like to be put in their place from time to time, am I right? Now, Rick is much more mature. Maybe he was much more like Brian when he was younger, but now he has responsibilities. Heās lived a lot, and that shaped who he is⦠But I think after they lost Sara, maybe he felt like he shouldāve cherished his time with her more while she was alive, and now heās a bit lost. But after the MCās condition happened, and now that he sees someone he cares about being in danger, heās going to try to make the most out of it, being a little goofy, being more present or something like that. And fucking, of course, hehe, we canāt forget that! But I really want the feelings to feel real, not just the words being filthy (although they will be extremely filthy :P). When I describe the charactersā cocks, specifically Brianās and Rickās for now, I almost like to give them a little bit of a personality, you know? Brianās is this young, needy cock that needs attention all the time, and even though he came, a little kiss brings him right back up. I feel like if we let it run wild, the MC would spend all day getting his medicine from him (I have plans for that hehe, but it will take a while). Rickās cock is a little bit angrier. The old man doesnāt take care of it enough, so anytime itās out, itās a little bit rough, so thereās that! I totally intend to keep doing that. Like, maybe a scene where the MC kind of forgets Brianās there and starts making out with his cock, and Brian says, āShould I leave you guys alone?ā or something, but now Iām just rambling! Thank you so much for the input! This type of comment is the main reason Iām making this game. Of course, I like the extra support, and I really want to have this as my main source of income, but honestly, I could spend all day discussing the intricacies of complex relationships, or just how filthy, raw, and exhilarating sex is. xD
Favorite scene: The heart to heart with Rick. Length and pacing: Enjoyed the dynamics getting fleshed out. Emotional moment: Definintely want to see more, maybe like a BFF we haven't met yet, or a contrasting DILF-figure to Rick. Naughty content: Good length, scent-kink from *old undies* made it feel short (Just me maybe). Scene that stood out: Brian's smug face after Kevin's dazed faux pas's. Future Content: Cockwarming?? Could ease them into BJs or act as clean-up after a messy dose.
Thanks for sharing! As I said, I loved writing that scene with Rick too! I've been thinking so much about the new characters and the order I want to introduce them in... I've been planning to introduce most of them first, and then, after that, let you guys decide who you want to interact with more... But it's still a little too early for that. But there's totally gonna be another DILF xD. Let's just say he's not as much of a gentleman as Rick! š I totally plan to do some cockwarming too, but I feel like the reason for it needs to make sense, not just happen because we're horny dogs. :P Thanks again for the input! š
_What was your favorite scene - Brian pushing for more this puppy eyes_ _How did you feel about the length - It was fine but would not go shorter then this_ _How did you feel about the emotional moment - Like Kevin in his head as Rick is trying to be a dad_ _Was there enough naughty content for you - Yes_ _Was there a particular description - Liked it all_ _Is there anything you'd like to see more - My fav is chastity but think that be hard for the female MC_ _Did you run into any bugs - Nope looked good to me_
Thank you so much for sharing that! I almost didnāt put Brianās puppy eyes into the game, so Iām really glad I changed my mind! Hehe. And no worries about the length! Iāll always aim to release at least this amount of content. If a chapter ends up being particularly short, like Chapter 3, Iāll try to pair it with another chapter whenever possible. Iām also really enjoying how the relationships between the characters are developing! I want those bonds to keep growing naturally as the story moves forward. Iāll definitely think about the chastity idea! That would probably have to be something exclusive to Kevin. If not that specifically, Iād still love to explore some size-related teasing and Kevin feeling a little embarrassed or insecure about himself. I love writing him doing the math like his cock is 2 hands size while brian's is more than 3. š Thanks again for answering all the questions! š
