"Double Gyaru Cosplayers GO!" English edition test
Hello my Patrons and Readers! (This is an open post for everyone)
In this summer, Miki and LUNA, two Gyaru heroines from "Double Gyaru Cosplayers" were in action again, wearing monster catching trainer costume.
I'd already shown you some pics with Japanese text...
Then now, I can show you English version of it!
This is a first test pic of "Double Gyaru Cosplayers GO!" English edition.
How do you think about it?
I'm worry about... "Manga" text layout (Right-UP to Left-Down) suits CG artwork like this...or not.
I could put text Left to Right... but for original art made in Manga style, Miki (a gyaru in right) starts to talk first. So it is hard to start text from Left.
I feel current pic is not so bad... (at least you can read them Up to Bottom) but if it too confuses you to reading, I would like to hear your opinions.
Well,
Anyway, I'll make more Miki and Runa arts with English!
I hope to raise this project to a CG Collection with reasonable volume.
For it will be sub-project, proceeding may be slow... but I hope you enjoy them as Patreon exclusive work!
If you are not a Patron yet and love Miki and Luna, why not join us?
Thank you!
Comments (10)
I think it would be a good incentive for patrons, and it would certainly go towards convincing me to become one.
If I become a patron will I get the Japanese text version?
Oh, I had not shown Japanese text version, but I can do it easily if requested :D
Right to left is fine, although perhaps in the future for colored works is that you should make the text a different color depending on which girl is speaking, so its easier to tell when both are on the page.
Thank you for your opinion! Changing text color is easy, indeed I do it sometimes. So I can do it for Double Gyaru GO!
Awesome, can't wait to grab the finished product x)
Nice! I hope Mayumi, Miki, and Luna become recurring characters in your future works.
right to left formatting is fine to me, I'm used to reading Japanese works that way
I second this.
Woohoo!!!