Dark Born: Bk. I - Ch. 51 | The Day of Judgment |
Happy weekend, everyone!
Here’s Chapter 51 of Dark Born.
I think this is quite an intense chapter, and one that WILL be significant, not just for Book 1, but throughout the entire series. I’ve actually been working on it for the past two weeks, writing and adding bits and pieces to it alongside the other chapters I’ve released, because there was no way I was going to finish this in a single week otherwise. And I almost still didn’t finish it on time, as you can probably tell from the Sunday release.
You may also notice the POV is not purely Adam’s, that was a deliberate choice for this chapter.
Anyway, that’s enough talking from me…
Enjoy, and please feel free to share your thoughts if you can. I’d really like to know what you think.
Comments (12)
I can't wait to hear about the deal Zephyr made with Adam too. Though now that his power is made known to the public I don't know how the world will deal with him. He might make more enemies than the Church and might have to flee to the demon world and try to establish himself as their Lord. But I guess his real mission and reason for coming to this world is to promote the belief in Zephyr and the primordial among the humans. Anyway so many possibilities and that is what makes waiting for the next chapter worthwhile.
Gotta say, I haven't been entirely a fan of Adam moving away from Elsa but this was just badass. I'm still hoping the two of them can figure something out and Adam can start trusting her or something but I'm all the way back in on this man
I don’t think Adam will enjoy the aftermath of this from his women. I don’r think they were expecting that much brutality. I’m curious if any of them leave him over this.
So true. They've now seen a whole different side of him and he came back from the dead. Awwwkward...
*insert absolute cinema meme* I loved it! Can’t wait to find out about the deal. You’ve inspired me when it comes to my own book I’m trying to write. 10/10
That makes me so happy to hear. Go for it!
That is MONEY! And I can't wait to hear about the deal.
Glad you enjoyed it. Details of the deal will be revealed in the next few chapters.
Amazing
I’m happy you liked it.
The lovely feel of comeuppance👌🏾👍🏾
It was satisfying for me as well.