Dark Born: Bk. I - Ch. 33 | Revelations II |

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Hey everyone, here’s chapter 33.

Originally titled “Meeting” but changed to “Revelations II” as this better captures the chapter.

I hope you enjoy it, and please leave a few words if you can. I’d like to know what you think.

Comments (3)

ForgottenCode · April 28, 2026

I liked it. I hope we get to see the private conversation between Minerva and Elsa

JamRoll · April 25, 2026

Very happy you had Adam come clean even if he wouldn't have been called out for what happened. I am a big fan of Elsa and Adam and hope they find a way to come back stronger!

RMN · April 25, 2026

Well done again. I am somewhat concerned about the uncertainty and seeming powerlessness of Elsa in this situation. She’s not accustomed to this position. Hopefully something can done to restore some of her confidence.