AU - Nayana and Koan Live
#2 Color vote from January. An alternate reality exploring what life might have been like if Zen and Natani's village hadn't been burned down and the deaths of their parents had never occurred, suggested by Carter!
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Kinda makes it sad
While almost everyone looks very happy here, I've gotta say, Natani looks kinda dead inside. Compared to how he's normally drawn in the comic (with pupils and eye highlights, like everyone else here), his eyes appear hollow and dead. And it's not because of the brain link with Zen, cause that never happened in this timeline. This is because the life he's living is a lie. He's trying to conform to what his family and society expect of him and can't do it, because he's not a she. As sad as it is that this timeline never happened, the one upside is that Natani actually gets to live.
These were heated discussions on a serious background on an somewhat inappropriate platform. I am confident that the outcome would have been more satisfying for everyone if we had had them in person with a beer or two in our hands. I think very few people here will change their position and that's not my aim: I'm not a missionary. But I hope that some of us have perhaps been given a little food for thought. Just my two cents in the hope of a conciliatory conclusion. I think it's important to stay open minded and keep the conversation going, even on such controversial topics.
I agree. I wouldn't also mind this kind of talk in a bar with a beer, or on a forum. But not here. Here it's inappropriate. Because there is a time and place for such talks. I think Tom would be upset if he saw these heated arguments of people, oozing with self-righteousness and contempt or even hate. Those topics are important to discuss, no doubt, but not here. You don't discuss that on funeral or comedy shows. Like those hecklers who interrupt a comic on stage with smth like "my friends are dying in Palestine". To 'Bring Awareness', that how those holy warriors of light call it. It just straight up poisons people's experience. I would just feel bad about myself if I continue participating in this arguing here, feel bad for annoying all other fellow Tom's art enjoyers who come here not to discuss something important. So I won't do it anymore.
I can see Nat becoming a really good farmer. She got the drive to be in the shape for that hard labor.
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So then the question remains how did Nat get brown eyes? Does that come from her father?
Hard to judge, as his fathers eyes are not clearly drawn in the sketch or page 1226. Also I don’t know any other picture of Koan. But what else should it be?
Koan: [takes out a pistol] I said, "Find one." Natani: (gulp)
Okay that's just wrong.
Attempt at an image analysis. When I saw AU - Nayana and Koan Live for the first time, I commented “Heartwarming”. Now there's the color version and also based on the discussions here, the “simple comic image” has been on my mind quite a bit. Yes, grandparents and grandchildren are heart-warming. But next to them is Natani. He's the only one who, from what I can tell, is wearing typical Wolf-Keidran male clothing (see also Koan in Nat's memories on page 1226 of the comic) and the eyes speak volumes: I don't think Tom drew empty pupils here by accident. While a family idyll is shown here, Nat is on the sidelines, somehow not a part of it (although I think he's a very good uncle to his nieces and nephews, without perhaps being able to use the word in this AU). And: thoughtless words from loved ones hit the hardest. I now think that Alaric's picture of the closet fits much better than I perceived it at the beginning. And if I've learned anything from the sketches and the comics, it's that Tom rarely leaves details to chance. One interpretation and certainly one of many possible ones. But I would like to thank Tom as an artist as well as Alaric, Lago24, puugu and many other co-discussants (but also my daughter and her boyfriend) who have given me an insight that was initially foreign to me, but now seems quite natural if you want to treat your fellow human beings with appreciation. As Alaric wrote: “Well written characters can speak to people like this does” - if you want to listen and have some support. What do I always say? I write too much.
Never stop writing too much <3
I think Natani has a bright future in front of her. She has a full, loving happy family and great potential. Of course this likely means that the universe has to compensate by having some other poor random Keidran Family and village be destroyed. Karmic balance
Tom confirmed Nat's still a guy here, even if he doesn't realize it (yet).
Good work Tom 🥰🥰🥰
Beautiful scene! Lots of joy, and some sorrow. Great art makes us think. Well done!
The sad look on Nat's face, oof. I remember those days.
It hits hard. I hope you're doing well today!
Do wolfs not have willies
We need an answer!
A big happy family!
Rogue 'Zenny' spotted! xD
Offhand I'd say that both of the guys married up. Maybe Natani will accidentally find herself far from home and meeting a short Basitin who's looking for his long lost fiance and find herself strangely attracted to this long eared guy.
Tom confirmed Nat's still a guy here, even if he doesn't realize it (yet).
Ten minutes later, Keith stumbles up to the fence. He is dusty and sweaty from the road, desperate for food, and half-delirious from thirst, barely able to articulate a plea for aid. Natani: "DIBS!"
Poor Natani, his eyes look even sadder in color.
Beautiful scene, beautiful characters, sad it's not the true timeline. 'coz everyone just happy & thriving,was it should be, no shenanigans in sight. Well done Tom ~ 💖
Guys please no war in the comments 🙏
Hmmm ...gl with that one, although I do hope the same. 🤔🙏🏾
This is the timeline where Nat teases Zen about his girlfriend instead of Zen teasing nat about Keith.
buddy, Zen’s got a wife here
This turned out great. Amazing job. 👍
Nayana has heterochromia? That's a nice detail, great drawing Tom!
she does i didn't notice that in the comic...that's kinda a refrence to Nat though that was due to the temporary soul merge.
This came out beautifully, but I must again note how bittersweet this AU is. Nat is living an internalized, personal hell and you can see it in his eyes. Painfully relatable, especially when you feel trapped having to live up to societal norms, expectations, AND restrictions as an LGBTQ+ individual. Not to mention, his parents.
You may be right, Alaric, but as we do know next to nothing about this AU, there is still hope things will come out good for him there also. On the other hand I got the feeling that You are at least partly refering to rl fates of real people and for our modern world these fates are a shame.
I love this!!! Thank you everyone!!
Double congrats!
A good family scene! Sad it's an au but still wonderful and as RemyHindle said even greater in color! But I think Nat is wrong. He'd make an excellent *parent* because love of family knows no gender boundaries!
Those who doubt their suitability as parents often turn out to be the best because they consciously try to achieve the best. And so I also got the feeling that Nat would be an exellent *parent*.
I wonder what’s going through Nat‘s right now because of that look in her eyes? The colouring is perfect in this scene!
His eyes, which also answers your question, too
So cute, glad this one got color voted so fast,who would natanis mate be? Keith or someone else you think? Iam still thinking Keith, but then again these Au posts can be a bit of a fun mystery, so it could be anyone for natani, mayne a character we don't know about
i'm certain it could be keith as he may have stumbled upon this place and have liked it so he visited more regularly maybe even stayed for a day or 2 then stumbled on natani
i like the idea that even if natani never realized hes trans he would still be the one wearing the most clothes to cover up.
stop using that vulgar word, please
For those wondering, Zen's wife, Lilith, appeared first in 2017: https://www.patreon.com/c/twokinds/posts?filters%5Btag%5D=Lilith
Ah, that’s her name!
That’s a good one!
A life that could've been, it looks even greater in color! :)
We need to know who zen wife is!?
She’s right next to him her name is Lilith
