Whitefall [Ad-Free]

idc what yall say Vincent and the doctor will always make me cry

CK Walker's stories are a constant battle of millennial core and cringe vs fantastic writing and compelling characters

Only halfway through this but I cannot get over the fact the bus station is devolving into tribalism after 4 days. Like, that’s literally the joke in that one South Park episode where the kids get rid of all the adults and run the town: that the adults have only been gone like two weeks tops. And even that lasted longer!

Theres a lot of hate on borrasca in the comments and i won't stand for it

ah yes, the cusper experience of watching 9-11.5 of doctor who

Reading these comments I’m starting to realize who wrote the cringe parts of The Haunting of Hill House and The Haunting of Bly Manor 😭🫩

Obviously this story has its flaws but harping so incredibly hard on Borrasca V and the occasional missteps by CK Walker just rubs me the wrong way. She still has moments that are impeccable and work very well. Putting Borrasca up on a pedestal as hard as we all do means that everything else she does needs to live up to her masterpiece, it’s unfair. Let her cook and if you don’t mess with it, you don’t

Lotta wannabe writing critics in these comments good lord lol

Though i fully understand peoples qualms with this story and it DEFINITELY dragged in the middle, but it really saved itself with that ending in my eyes. I really enjoyed it

Funny how all the hipsters crap on CK Walker. Probably think Biggie and Sinatra are also overrated 😅

Are you nervous

This is very Fantastic Land

“Pop tarts are gone man I’ll be outside” one of the greatest quotes of all time

If I hear one more “my girl” or a reference to wanting a cigarette I’m gonna lose my goddamn mind 😭

CK walker writes well, nice style and tends to have an interesting premise to her stories. Then without it fail it goes to shit and becomes the meme of the horse drawing getting progressively worse. Borrasca is probably the most overrated story going which is annoying because the premise could have been really interesting, especially if it leaned more towards the supernatural. I really don't get why she can drop consistent stinkers and the boys still grin through it until they can't anymore, there are better authors out there and at least they seem to learn from their feedback.

I think the hardest thing to believe is all these folks from red states, seemingly working class folks, there isn’t a single person taking their multi day bus trip with a concealed pistol or something.

That wasn’t her boyfriend he was a random methhead that was gonna try to rape/assault her

I’m surprised so many people are angry over this. The beginning was a bit rough but it really did well at the end. Not every story needs to be a slam dunk and not every author’s story is a borrasca. It was still a fun read.

After rewatching a couple times I do appreciate this story more than the first time, yeah it has a couple silly moments but its a pretty solid story she just knows how to do character work.

What a fucking banger. Best we have had in a long time, it made all the bad ones worth it.🙂

I was so invested in the beginning and like five minutes into them stopping at Whitefall it fell off so hard lmao

So I may be over thinking but does this happen every time people go to whitefall or was this just a 1 time thing? I don't know if it's even mentioned or not.

Screw what everyone here is saying. CK Walker in my opinion makes the most engaging stories, good or bad. Please keeping reading more of her work.

I feel like this story would make a good South park special, like a parody of the mist 😂

I’m eating ppl day one 😆

I wish they would put the camera on hunter more when he’s doing voices. Ex specially when there is a lot of different ones. It be interesting watching him bounce from voice to voice

In every single episode Hunter be saying: I wonder if it’s like a purgatory or something😂 I love it!

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Got Patreon just to see an ad free version of Hunters foot falling asleep. Scariest happenings to date.

As far as Stephen King's work goes, I've been saying the same thing for years. He does incredible concept and world building, but his actual writing is just not it. Any SK book that I pick up ends up being a slog in the middle and I have to force myself to finish it, *if* I finish it. He is incredibly talented, but his writing doesn't quite deserve the glaze it gets.

I'm genuinely surprised that Hunter didn't bring up a certain Twilight Zone episode, Sunrise from the 2002 Twilight Zone revival, purely for the moment at the end when Kris finally eats human flesh and they are rescued so quickly afterward. While I do prefer the original TZ, I saw Sunrise as a kid and it has stuck with me for all these years. Though it has its differences, Sunrise is about a group of students who, while exploring some Aztec ruins when they knock over a jug of sacrificial blood. The sun suddenly "disappears" and the group eventually decides to sacrifice someone to bring the sun back, only for them to hear on the radio at the end that the sun was only blocked by a rare stella cloud. It leaves the group feeling that they killed their friend for nothing. Kris held out cannibalizing his fellow man for so long, just to finally give in and do so.

This is a bit ridiculous

I was cozy in the beginning, disappointed in the middle, and absolutely gagged by the end. I don’t think that’s ever happened before, so, new experience unlocked? Anyway, I really enjoyed this one, but I have the bias of loving character-driven stories. It was also a great way for me to work through how disturbed I am by cannibalism - was very uncomfortable for those scenes, but I feel like I grew from getting through them. The Kermit bit had me dying lol.

I was not a fan of the lord of the flies turn this took. I wanted more spooky mystery connected to the environment. The boys explanations and thoughts at the end actually made me like the story more. I think they had great ideas that weren’t intended in the story. But then that starts a conversation about intent of a story and yadayada… Glad it was read after all the suggestions though

Thinking about it some, whitefall kinds feels like snow covering the sins or leaving a "blank slate" for everyone that came through the station, and the only people who made it out were people with enough resolve to be honest with themselves and move forward. Stikes choosing to finally do anything it takes for his family like he said he would really nails that in.

Story was solid other than a few scenes!

i refuse to believe no one else caught that fnaf sound effect at 17:31

You gonna mispronounce Spokane the whole time huh

Is there any reason I cannot watch this episode, I was halfway through at work and it paused and I haven't been able to get it to start playing since that day.

I feel like I'm the only one who enjoyed it yes it was cringe in parts but I liked the build up and learning about the chacters in the first half for all her fualts U think she dose well introducing and getting us to care about the chacters in the story

You people complain so much, I don’t think white fall was that bad tbh there’s some very interesting aspects, mayhem mountain was sick, I have issues with some of her works but there’s something very endearing about the signature millennialisms with the songs n stuff . She gets alot more flack than some of the other authors in this podcast glad guys read it

I think this is my favorite of her stories since Borrasca 1-4

Hunter you gotta watch Attack on Titan. Isaiah was not kidding when he said it’s peak

The writing for this story does feel cheesy and the middle of the story was such a let down for me. I rarely get scared or goosebumps from any story they read but the moment about the 1 day had passed got me then the final line felt good. Shes a good writer even though cheesy writing sometimes.

Idk guys I thought this one was pretty good

Really enjoyed this one, the slow start lead to a good payoff

Happy appy couldn’t predict a story this shit

Working at Freddie's

For Acker I’m picturing Nick Swardson 🤣

ck walker does write like m night shyamalan tbh, i never put my finger on that

Being from spokane and hearing the over-pronounce the “Kane” part is hilarious lol caught my off guard when I first heard it

I'm having a stroke everytime wendi says Minianapolis 🥲😅😭💔

Mm.... Mini... minian....... .... Minianapolis

Minianapolis?? 😅

Minianapolis 🥲

I think CK would really shine in the slice of life or drama genres. I don't think she's a terrible writer, but (imho) I feel like she keeps trying to shoehorn her style into Horror when it's not always the best fit.

It’s taking FOREVER for something to happen in this story

i think about Fall of the house of usher ALL THE TIME

We got some wild opinions in the comments here and from the boys.

I feel like the reason it took until stikes did the cannibalism was because it basically was for him to prove he was truly willing to do anything for his wife and baby like he kept saying the whole trip prior

Jesus, some people are acting like this is a bad story? This is easily one of the all time greats for me. Definitely not bad, and definitely not ‘horrible’ like some people are commenting.

Idk, tribe mentality can and has set in quicker in some situations and never occurred in others. I think 3 days, especially with the right (well wrong people really) can easily create tribes. I’ve seen it occur in less time over a less dire situation.

I liked it a lot. My only major gripe was the villains almost anime level of speaking and the fact that they got tribal on day 3 but I thought the start was strong and the latter half of the station and on was strong too. Macks family all being there was a gut punch that put a tear in my eye at work.

This wasn’t as bad once I got to the ending. There was just a lot of millennial cringe in the middle, but this was good

I think CK walker has ran her course for at least a while. Borassca was amazing, but everything else has either been really bad or a huge letdown.

The pronunciation of Minneapolis has me crying

I really liked this story.

if I was in a group that resorted to tribe mentality within 72hours, id immediately start a cannibal tribe before anyone else could

hearing the term "gay chicken" just unlocked the sleeper agent in me

What a terrible story. Junkie story goes nowhere, protag randomly talking about how beautiful the young girl is goes nowhere, the villain is like a born psychopath with no other personality traits, everyone who survives just takes it in their stride. He sends a complaint to the shuttle service? A COMPLAINT? PEOPLE GOT EATEN. Everyone would be calling the police! And the Ready Player One moment...as in transforming an established character so they fill some sort of quota. Just what a bad story needs, a character to rock up and say "by the way I am gay". This whole story reads like she wrote it without any sort of plan and just kept changing directions throughout.

why does cringe = marvel to hunter

Bro the doctor who episode of Van Gogh going to the future to see how much people appreciate his art is SUCH an amazing scene. I understand Hunter wasnt a fan because the scene has made it’s rounds an has gotten to the point of over exposure, but watching that scene for the first time REALLY hit me. Specifically because Van Gogh died without anyone appreciating his art, iirc he committed sewer slide never knowing how many people loved his art. Its like… it was the best thing that ever couldve happened to him

I was very scared when I saw that this was by CK walker. I started to read the comments a little and got even more scared. Then when I realized they were going to be trapped in a bus station and they went tribal in three days I thought this story was another second half of deep woods or borasca v. But I was wrong. This story got really good after the time started to warp. Every character actually became a person after the lights went out. Even the villain. He had bad dialogue a lot of the time but he wasn’t cartoonishly evil. He wasn’t raping women left and right or saying that they were alphas. Amanda’s death was good and all of the fleshed details about Mack were perfect. Dillion being gay didn’t matter at all but was chill. I just wish that Gracie had some more development too. I want to know what happened to the people who walked out of the station. Because it’s just said that they disappeared. Which could mean that they made it out. After all none of the people who walked out were important enough to be updated about at the end. I like to think that there were two ways to leave. Either sell your humanity to show your determination to survive and to make change or go against the worst conditions someone could go through with nothing but determination to survive. Both require immense effort. Unless you are like acker an don’t really care about humanity. Anyways I thought this story was like a 6 total. First half was like a 4 but the ending really got me. I don’t get why people are hating on this story in particular so much. It had its moments but it was much better than everything else bedsides borasca 1-4.

This was a great story, I think Borrasca ruined all future CK Walker stories for the community by being so great . You know it's a great story because of how locked in the lads were, especially towards the end

The CK Walker writing cliff hits again

I love that it took Isaiah half of the story to think of left right game, the moment they got on the bus and there were so many characters that was my first thought LMFAO

The fall of house of usher was like two years ago? How old is this recording lol

Reading the comments before I watched it made me think it was going to be an awful story. But I now realize people are blowing it out of proportion. It did have some eye rolling moments, but the ending and the character growth by the end made it worth it. The cringe that she sprinkles in is what makes her stories hers. Whether you like her writing or not, she's obviously done so well with it that it is now her career. I would love for y'all to interview her.

We NEED someone to animate the bit between the bus perv and Kermit the frog 🤣🤣

The "it felt like everyone stood up and clapped" moment after the fight is kinda realistic in my experience

Loved the interaction between Hunter and Isaiah for the conversations between the MC and Mel lol. I need an animation of the convos but with Hunter and Isaiah as the characters and it's just them flirting with each other.

I know it's a fictional story but I love how the two guys hate each other in the beginning yet put that aside to protect the girl from the weirdo.

Coming from a Minnesotan, I died a little every time they said “Mini-anne-apolis”

The last 20 minutes after the story ends is just the boys coping and trying to make CJ Walker a better author than she is

Wanted to note i actually purchased Travis’s book because of the series!

I enjoy hearing you guys do stories. I would hope yall can see and read this story, its fun and I think would be a fun read: https://www.reddit.com/r/HeadOfSpectre/comments/mrirfj/i_work_in_a_prison_for_monsters_i_interviewed_the/?rdt=53727

Also kinda reminds me of The Belko Experiment.

Anyone know the name of the track on 2:31:00 it sounds so emotional i love it

Ngl I don’t think she’s that good a writer. She writes like she’s a fan of hazbin hotel or something- villains are always edgy and cringe.

Shocked they never said it felt like the temptation of Eve by the devil. Acker being the devil and the meat being the apple.

Hunter made Acker a way more fun Villain. Made me realise that there's very few "sassy" villains, and I really need more

Spokane mentioned hell yeah!!!!!!! Mr creep and mr cast, if you read this, PLEASE come to spokane if you do another tour. I know so many people here who love the show. (also, you were saying spokane wrong, spo - can, not spo cane. But no worries ik its confusing)

if you want to watch something, watch one piece, if you want to consume the greatest piece of fiction next to the bible, watch/read one piece.

Good characters, okay story, sad there was no ice maze 💔

Y'all pls stop glazing this lady. I'm so over it.

People are such complainers. It was a good ep. Not a fav but still great.

CK Walker wrote one good story and this is the last one anyone talks about whatsoever, let's move on now. There's an ocean of authors out there

I would love it if you guys could read this story, its been a hope of mine that you'd get to this story cause it is an interesting story. https://www.reddit.com/r/HeadOfSpectre/comments/mrirfj/i_work_in_a_prison_for_monsters_i_interviewed_the/?rdt=53727

"You can only have one Mamba and Dingdong a day" Sounds like Lent ☦️

"No one here is your friend..." Bitch can we at least let the power go out before we don the leather and call ourselves Lord Humungus?

Lips

POST FALLS MENTIONED

AS A SPOKANE RESIDENT IM SO STOKED LMAO

Being trapped in a place that you could leave, explore, and possibly scavenge items from nearby that could help you and your community, but not even attempting this, is wild to me…. I think the one thing that won me back was when he was told he was only gone for a day. That makes me think the station is almost inter dimensional or something

At the point of burning someone's face I would not care about dying and just sneak up and rip Acker's balls off. Or put a shiv through his jugular. Human jaws are actually quite strong as well. I'm not crazy btw, I'm just saying.

i remember this story being a lot better when i heard it the first time as a young teenager

Quite torn about this one. There were some really good points but mostly was nothing to write home about :/

Ive never noticed how often Isaiah interrupts hunter until this ep

I wish someone had crucified acker

Very early in and this gives left right game vibes

As a native Minnesotan I hate how Isaiah says Minneapolis I thought he was saying Indianapolis the first time herd it

Honestly, this was a good story. I enjoyed it, the ending really brought it back for me

I felt like it was purgatory, I love that the antagonist gets his way because in real life it be like that.

Roger from American Dad is a Chiefs fan?

Looking through the comments it is so crazy to see so many people from Spokane lmao. I will say this as someone who lives in Spokane this story does capture the chaos of taking the flixbus back home lmao

BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! Man this story fell off once they got trapped in the bus terminal.

Spokaine is driving me insane! I spent more than half my 30 years in Spokane and its a shithole but its Spō-can😭😭😭 Also hilarious in the beginning hoping that post falls isnt the same way its like 20 minutes from spokane

Spo-can

hard cut at 1:37:00 because hunter leaked his real age

1:08:30 Hey buddy I'm gonna need that link, stat

Kinda sucks the story took a sorta nose dive about half way through. Everything with the bus In the beginning with new characters arriving was super cool but as soon as it because a lord of the flies survival esk story with different factions it fell off hard, imo of course

Scraggly was high as a kite. Bit Chris. I think Chris hallucinated everything.

Smooth operator Isaiah, schizophrenic papa meat what a treat.

I would've uppercutted that old mans head off

Do you think the creep guy in the beginning was a person who went there last time and he went crazy ? Idk

I thought the entire time it was just a sickness induced hallucination from the meth head biting his arm? Like they made a point about it and from then on it started being out of normality. That would explain the cannibalism angle and the mentioned of the guy who was sick that died. Idk felt like it was less a dimension shift more a mental space illusion

Hunter’s Kermit voice gave me flashbacks to Jordan Peterson’s 10 seconds of fame, I felt like he was going to tell me to clean my room

Oh Isaiah, a Doctor Who non-romance fanfic is like a gateway drug, before you know it you’ll be jerking it to self-insert Hazbin Hotel Tumblr slop, I fear

Not a single comment about Isaiah cussing, y’all only know how to complain enough to make this man break his own morals

My takeaway of the ending is that this guy who cannibalized his group and other people without hesitation, the one who should be "full of meat" is just an empty shell. He is relying only on primitive instincts. Not a formed thought crossed his mind. He didn't even notice more than three weeks had passed. He isn't living a life, he's just existing. On the other hand the protagonist held on tight to his beliefs, thoughts and feelings till the end. Both survived and both got the chance of boarding the bus but only one of them has a life worth fighting for.

50 mins in and Dons Dad has returned

I wish this was authored by anyone else just to see how different the episode would have been.

Feel like Walker's villains are hit or miss and this is a great example. Acker isn't threatening, doesn't get under your skin like a good villain does. He's just annoying. Can't take anything he says seriously. It's just insanely cringe every time he opens his mouth

Peanut M&M are objectively the worst M&M

I loved this story!! My first thought is that Stikes finally giving into cannibalism was him actually PROVING he was willing to do ANYTHING for his gf and baby. He wasn’t just saying it anymore. He was driven to the point where it were Whitefall said, “prove it bitch!” Mack was 100% a mirror of Chris and served a purpose of literally seeing his future if he didn’t actually believe the words he was saying (he would do anything)

I love being in my own bubble of enjoyment, this story was good and you can’t touch me

CK Walker can right brilliant characters, but in terms of overall story, it’s severely lacking, there’s plenty of amazing stuff in the meat of the story, but it’s like she has to back write exposition to fill out the rest of the story and that’s what brings down her writing

this was no bueno

I think what kept taking me out of the story was Isaiah’s dialogue😢

I feel bad cus i love borrasca (not 5) but anything else CK Walker does seems to have a great first act that falls apart by the end. It sucks cus i get invested in these first acts cus the writing is pretty good and then it just turns around and laughs in my face for doing so by just being so Highway to Hell Deepwoods coded.

Another thing too about the main character being the last to turn, it was forshadowed earlier in the story when Mack kept saying that he was holding everyone up

Someone's going to sounds clip this papa wendi bromance

Margaret lives on my Keurig! She keeps the kcup latch shut and watches me while I cook :^)

I will NOT tolerate Buchanan slander, we're not THAT poor >:(

Mack - Trumpet Fight Guy Dillon - Nathan from South Park Gracie - Emma Roberts' character from We're the Millers

this story convinced me to listen to lord of the flies LMAO

god this one was already starting to feel like a slog before they even got to the terminal. maybe i hate CK Walker maybe im a bad person

Why they devolve so fast lol like id just leave idc about a storm

I feel like Walker is good in the beginnings and the characters are set up well but. After that it feels like everything happens so fast. Deep words and borasca in their first parts were awesome, but the sequels sucked. This one was good in the beginning and felt like it just didn’t have anything interesting after that besides a couple moments. I was liking the ideas Isiah had and wished it went in that direction rather than this “everyone trying to survive and now we start eating people”

Also these people talking about “rationing” vending machine “food” lofl. 80% of that is empty calories…. Who’s going to survive long term off that anyway

They became zombies but much more subtle!!!

Who are these freaks lol…. If you’re on a deserted island, or crashed plane, sure let’s cannibalize each other! But these people are trapped in a bus station, listening to a bus station PA tell them they can’t leave….. Lofl

Hunter is doing KC dirty 🤣🤣🤣

As a WA resident, wendigoon pronouncing Spokane as "Spo-kane" instead of "spo-k-ane" bothered me

Floor Dolley? I’m third generation mechanic and I’ve never heard that maybe you’re referring to a creeper?

CK Walker is terrible at writing guys. She is either a massive gooner who can't help but put her rape fetish into every story or a femcel that needs to work out her issues with men.

This story's lord of the flies parts, sans the setting, is almost identical to FantasticLand by Mike Bockoven. Great story, definitely recommend reading it. It too has a shockingly quick dive into groups and murders. Really fun.

What an amazing story with absolutely no payoff whatsoever. Like it's all so beautifully written and all of the characters were so interesting and got you so bought into the story but then it was all for absolutely nothing. Like what was actually the point in this entire story? Some strangers get trapped at a bus station, go insane, eat each other, then the buses magically reappear. Woo. I guess I'm just pissed because it was so well written and such a great setup for absolutely nothing to happen. I guess the horror is supposed to be just humans and what they'll do for survival. Kind of lame. And the twist is that the town doesn't actually exist. Lame. Such great characters. Such an interesting setup and it feels like to author just had no clue where to go with it.

Isaiah and i would have been best friends when we were 13 i fear

(With a lisp) "No one messes with Kansas City!" *Snaps fingers and does the chicken neck thing*

I feel like hunters ticket idea is like Frank Darabont changing the end of the mist. The change was so good that even the author wished they had written it that way.

minutes 55-60 could've been avoided by just saying no homo

As someone that lives next to Spokane, WA it's so painful to hear them pronounce it as "Spo-kain" and not the proper way, "Spo-can" (or as the locals call it, Spocompton)

Honestly, you can never really be for sure, but I’d hope people would last a little bit longer before devolving into a tribe mentality if they’re in a situation like this.

Something I think would be cool is if yall took a break at the end of the episode, like a day or two, to collect your thoughts on the story and then talked about it after having time to digest it. Even just for some stories like this one that are long and intense.. I think you guys are good at analyzing stories and taking a minute to think would make yalls insight even better

All roads lead back to freddy’s

I have never heard Spokane pronounced that way lmao

Great episode. Love CK's stories. Isaiah please I am begging you learn how to pronounce words in the English language.

Can we do a bonus creepcast episode of wendigoons dr. Who fanfiction?

Listening to this while stuck on a bus home hits different.

I'm just glad the guy that got thrown off the bus did not come back as some sort of antagonist.

Yoooo I live right close to the town the main character leaves from (Buchanan, Virginia). They got a cool swinging bridge. 🤩

I find it odd that there was nothing more mentioned about the pervy meth head guy biting the main character. I for sure think the whole incident is somehow related to that.

This is a creepypasta pod, so they’re gonna be a little corny at times. I’m here for it. I get the criticism of the first half when they’re on the bus, but I think that the weird “and everyone clapped” moments were meant to set up the mob mentality that would come later.

That was an INCREDIBLE story

Honestly this story was pretty good imo

Isaiah you actually MUST watch Evangelion. It has, witnout exaggeration, every single trait, trope, and theme that you've ever gotten excited about in these stories and its the best example of a lot of them.

I’ve never been in this exact situation…. But I’m not hanging out in a dirty greyhound station for a week, eating chips and pop tarts, and sleeping on the floor… I’m braving the storm and potentially freezing

Just finished the story, I thought it was pretty good. I definitely see what hunter was saying at the end of the different main characters being like alternate variations of the protaganist and the people in his life, it could also perhaps be applied to acker. A fully selfish version in which he has no concern or connection for others, or perhaps acker is just the usual token selfish character. The story seems more to me as a cruel game rather than a purgatory. Similar to the airplane story, a higher power toying with humans to see how far they can be pushed before shedding their ideals, and the very moment our character breaks they are brought out of whatever little hell they were trapped in. Perhaps there are different iterations or definitions of purgatory but to my knowledge it is an inbetween place or somewhere people are sent for penance. However, a solid portion of the characters do not have something to pay for. The strongest example being gracie. This is also a 2am ramble so maybe my tired and spooked brain is missing something. Another fun little story from one of the goats.

r/Verastahl verastahl.com

Spocain is killing me lol, it's pronounced Spocan and spelled Spokane.

I’m happy to see more and more people wake up to C.K Walkers writing quality. It’s just not that great. Even borrasca wouldn’t have been that great if it wasn’t for our boys turning Kyle into a meme.

The Abiotic Factor story

The story was okay. The first half was way better (before getting to Whitefall). People complaining must have forgotten the horrors of Happy Appy. I felt my cast was respectably creeped, unlike the slog, pain and utter dread that the Happy Appy episode was.

ck walker has incredibly high highs and hellishly low lows, will lay out a fascinating premise and have moments of truly provocative writing only to follow it up with the most skin crawling millenial cringe lines ever written.

I was replying to another comment, and it got me thinking. If I made a real Mt. Rushmore of the most iconic, well written, early to middle Creepcasts (like how Mt. Rushmore has Presidents 1, 3, 16, & 24 out of 45ish) it would be Dathan Auerbach of Penpal Jack Anderson of The Left Right Game Felix Blackwell of Stolen Tongues Christian Wallis of several episodes now. Would love to add Nick Lowe or Lagotti, but Lowe hasonly been read recently & Lagotti is a renowned author, so it would be like having Stephen King on there, a bit gauche.

The ending of Whitefall mirrors The Mist. Both protagonists sacrifice their last shred of humanity, only for the horror to end minutes later.

Unrelated to the story, but End of Evangelion is indeed the true ending, and Hunter’s opinion on the rebuilds is 100% accurate

Don't worry Wendi they fall off after the 12th, also a 99% accurate representation of KC natives.

“I wrote a Fanfic on Vincent vangohs suicide” should be the creep cast version of “I like your shoelaces”

"I wrote a fanfic about Vincent Van Gogh's suicide inspired by the Doctor Who episode" I'm so sorry but you could not water board that information out of me LMFAO

C. K. Walker and stranger things writers: making a character Randomly come out as gay for no reason isn’t good representation. It’s just corny and stupid. Sincerely, a lesbian

So... are we not getting the patreon live streams you guys recorded? Would like an update

I’ve noticed that CK Walker is amazing at everything except writing “badass” scenes lol. I think that’s why Borrasca V fell short because that was the ENTIRE STORY

Has anyone else had issues taking Patreon to Spotify? I’m only having the issue for creepcast. It pulls over but all my stuff on Spotify for them has no videos? Just wanted to know if it was an issue or just a thing, this is the only patreon I have that is video form content everything else is only audio so I wouldn’t know for the other shows. Don’t want to go down a rabbit hole trying to fix it if it’s just a limitation of the system. Regardless I’ll be up creeping my cast somewhere

My stomach almost fell out of my body when I heard the words I saved up enough money and bought her a ticket (instantly thought it was gonna end with and it goes through whitefall or smthn similar) thank god it’s a plane ticket

That tweaker guy isnt Gracies boyfriend right? Did I miss somthing?

Thanks I needed that

Wendigoon’s comparison to a shyamalan movie is SO accurate but unfortunately I know he got the criticisms of shyamalan from nostalgia critic so I can’t take him seriously

CK Walker knows how to write a good ending and crazyyy hard hitters but also these people waited for an infant to pass away before they burst into the employee area? KC resort to eating people before eating two king size candy bars that Acker managed to keep secret through SEVERAL murders? And don’t get me started on B5, she cannot write villains

I guess by creeppasta standards, it’s a decent story. But giving it way too much credit because you guys like Borasca. Always enjoy the episodes regardless though

Not sure why the hate, some of the “bad guy” dialogue was a little goofy, but overall great story! Long set up but great payoff. Hard to build something, easy to tear it down.

Unrelated to the story. Did any of you all like the final version of Stolen Tongues that was released? IMO the version that was read on creepcast was much better

Rapid city mentioneddddd 🙏

next episode prediction: wendi’s van gogh fanfiction

I swear if I hear "play nice" one more time,

Bro this comment section is not it.. I ate this shit up such a good story

Immediately ordered the rest of her books after

Bro Mack is a good character😭

I would definitely clap and cheer seeing a chud like that get thrown off a bus tbh

SuperSonics mentioned ‼️‼️‼️

Fuck I'm building a Gundam as I watch lol

C.K. Walker can write touching moments it just feels like she can’t write antagonist characters

Just got to the scene where runaway says her name and I like double taked cuz that's my name and I was half listening lol

Boys I'm begging yall to read the Dr who fanfic, please😭

I feel like I must have missed something. There’s what like, 50 people on the non-Kansas city side, and they can’t stand up to the Kansas City side because they’ve been eating people? Like you could literally do the bumblebee defense strategy in that scenario and come out on top lol

🎶 You can have it all, my empire of rape 🎵

I made a previous comment about the dynamic of the protagonist and his gf being a realistic depiction of a toxic relationship, I was giving the story too much credit. At what point does ck walker stop being on the Mount Rushmore, she has more eye rolling, corny, and overly self indulgent stories than any other recurring author. I’m starting to think borrasca 1-4 was a fluke, the subtlety of that story has never been replicated, not even in the sequel to that story

Why does Isaiah say Mindianeapolis and not Minneapolis?? At 1:15:52 I had to go back and see if the author spelled it wrong or if he was just saying it wrong lol.

BILLINGS MONTANA MENTIONED!!!!!!!

C.K. Walker and her power fantasies

I have very mixed opinions on this story the first half was way to slow and not very interesting and the second half went a little to fast with certain things like everyone shouldn’t have gotten so violent so fast hoarding food and stuff. The dialogue was the best part not one of the best story’s they have read so far I’d rate it 5/10

the kermit bit was my favorite part lmao

I can’t believe Isaiah got Hunter pregnant

Please no rape *fingers crossed*

One time I traveled from NYC to Boston, it was supposed to be maybe a 4-5 hour bus ride. Turned into 8+ with no stops and people going crazy…. I know from first hand that the tribalism really would start on day 3

NOT THE CHAINSAW MAN REFERENCE

New favorite loved every second of the story !!!!

Please never read CK Walker again. This shit sucks lol

SPOKANE MENTION IN CREEPCAST

It’s really crazy that all of this stopped right after he partook in the “feast”. The story definitely feels like everything was led up to his decisions entirely and all for it to have been only a night. I believe it was portraying all of these things within him and his newfound urge to do better for his family. He waiting until he absolutely had to and was broken down into the smallest part of his being. He broke down in knowing that, through it all, he could do what it took to be a father. Even when continuing to mention the guy with the cigarette smoke at the beginning, he showed great willpower just from pure motivation and it shows by his determination to keep his humanity

One of my absolute favorite stories! The Nosleep Podcast also does a fantastic rendition.

As a big fan of doctor who, I knew IMMEDIATELY when Hunter mentioned it that he was joking.

I think the only logical conclusion of this episode is that we absolutely need Isaiah to read that fucking Dr Who Van Gogh fanfiction for the podcast, it’ll be the scariest story they’ve ever covered.

What abt the meth head who bit him?

Feeling like I’m in Whitefall waiting on my Amazon package and the PA keeps coming on like “it’s been delayed a few days” and honestly by the time it’s delivered I will probably be insane and people will probably be dead.

Just for the record, those people waited until after a baby died before they barged into the “employees only” area

This story reminds me of the lost tv show

Isaiah was right, this story was full of millennial cringe

C.K. Walker is the queen of absolute hitters or shitters and usually nothing in between, yet she was able to pull off both in this one story lol

I’m only like 10 minutes in but OOF Spokane is rough 😅 my husband and I almost got mugged the last time we were there.

Wow I didn’t expect a cameo from dons dad, great to see we’re still bringing back old cream crew guests🙏🏾

Spokane mentioned but at what cost 😭 (pronouncing it wrong)

i dont understand why the are saying the tribal thing happened too soon. this is a time before cellphones, so they are stuck in a blizzars with limited foods and no connection to the outside. imo 3 days seems about right for that to happen

Everytime there’s an actually good story the whole community turns into story critics lol you all need to touch grass

Wendi's point about Stephen King makes me feel so seen. I revere the man like no one else, but struggle with actually reading his books for the same reasons.

We recently watched Attack on Titan but crunchyroll messed up and showed us the final battle specials before the first half of season 4 so we were pretty confused about the "time skip".

If any one cares, its pronounced “spo-can”

I'd like to give Hunter and Isaiah some flowers. Hunter's voice acting makes these stories incredible and Isaiah is always an incredible narrator. Love it when he plays the protagonist. They have great chemistry.

I think it would be a cool idea to have an episode dedicated to going back to stories. I know at the end of this one, and others like left right game, you both say you need to chew on it. I would be interested to hear thoughts on the story after digesting it more, maybe a lil Patreon exclusive who knows

ITS SPO-CAN NOT CANE

don't usually comment, but figured I'd throw my hat in the ring on this one. C.K. Walker is a great writer and really knows how to make a good story. That said. i think there's 2 things that could be causing the disparity of quality between the different scenes of the story. 1. They purposefully write corny lines and meandering side plots to make serious moments hit harder. 2. They have good story points and plots then lack inspo for the in-between material.

Somebody tell these guys about Chris Barnett

Good god this story jumped the shark as soon as the blizzard started. Provided some good laughs though so it worked well as a comedy. Overall, great episode.

I'd love to see hunter and Isaiah collab on a monster design as the mascot for creepcast, as a toy for hunters company

Guys you all need to remember that these authors are putting out their stories for free on damn creepypasta.com lol you all act as if every writer has to be putting out stellar stories lol just sit back and enjoy the ride for gods sake

I think this story has a lot of good concepts and things to offer. In the beginning at the first 3 days, I agree the flow was very fast. It seemed almost comical which we’ve seen a few in CK Walkers writings lol. There was a lot of good character dialogue moments, and overall I think the base concepts are very fun to play with. A few things certainly could’ve been tweaked, but I’m always glad to get a long story for work on Monday lol

Timestamp 35:30 i bwt the angery old guy is mafia or something like that.

Isaiah admitting to writing van gogh fanfic... you could not water board that information out of me

Honestly one of my favorite stories

Just every average KC chiefs fan lmao

Rip Kermit

can someone please animate wendy goon holding hunters pregnant belly telling him he is his girl?!

Im at 2:25:45 and I don’t get why they aren’t all banding together and murdering Acker bro is annoying as hell, or maybe the story itself is just frustrating so far lol

creeping my cast till the white falls

The CK Walker hate in this comment section goes crazy. The dialogue and actions of characters when the tribalism initially starts is not greatest but there are so many gems in this story that people just ignore. Minor edits and rewrite could make this story perfect. I think by far Acker’s character could use a lot of refining and was the weakest point of the story.

Wendi… “Minneanapolis”? Bruh. As a MPLS based member of the seven sisters cult, plz learn our name lol

I’ve never been on a greyhound, but I have been to a greyhound station….. I imagine you can travel cross country for $20, probably get stabbed too

I feel like the chances of the main and final act of this story being a crazy meth bite dream is above 0%

CLEVELAND OHIO MENTIONED!!!!!!!

Spokane mentioned

1:16:09 😂😂😂 beautiful reference, editor

I liked the story, i think a lot of people saying they shouldnt read anymore CK Walker is just weird imo. Reading these comments i thought that the story was gonna be ass, but i honestly enjoyed it as it got to the end. Even if it was bad, i think reading a broad range of stories is good, to appreciate all stories and all writing. It just makes me sad sometimes thinking that the community just wants to be hyper critical and doomer pilled. I enjoy every story, good or bad, cuz I was able to listen to new stories.

God bless both of you beautiful boys for blessing us on Easter

Who goes to Louisville to buy horses 😭😭 Louisville is basically Kentucky hell

For the love of god someone make an animatic of the Kermit bits 😭

Solid narration and bits as usual fellas, but I'll be avoiding the CK Walker stories in the future lmao. I can deal with the cartoon character antagonists but the writing was way too frustrating for this one for me "'Everything I told you was true. But, about Sam, not Sarah." He took a breath. 'I love him' I looked down at the meat he was holding. He really must. To do this. To go against nature. Everything that made him human." The fact the main character thinks like this AFTER watching Acker hold a woman's head in a fire barrel then leave her to die of infection, followed by the woman's dad being lynched, is vastly more inhuman that eating a body to survive from my perspective lmao; at that point either pull a Denver and leave into the whiteout or start making chair leg shivs to prepare for when they inevitably come for your group if you do choose to stay after that.

I love my Margaret toy it fits so nicely

kermit the frog bit made me laugh good 👍

bro its been forever since i’ve heard of gay chicken 😂 Yes i know of this

Can we remove ck walker from the Mount Rushmore now? This story has so many lame moments, the only decent part of it was Mack. And other than that, nothing compelling happened and nothing was explained in any way. Plus the tribal stuff happening three days in was laughable

Yellowjackets But On Land

brother. i think she’s lying about being pregnant. If you’ve ever been around crazy couples who fight constantly You know This is an obvious possibility

Was Van Gogh playing gay chicken with a revolver in your fanfic?

Is it just Hunter's voices or can Ck Walker not write a villain without them being a complete cartoon?

Hearing hunter make that voice makes me miss cream crew

Fuck yeah, I live in Spokane!

So funny how they pretend to hate the dirty talk to each other to keep up appearances

I’m so glad Don’s dad appeared at 51:00 to protect runaway truly a creepcrew moment of all time

Run all you want, you can't escape the I Dared My Best Friend sequel forever

Interview with CK Walker for Patreon???

Somehow this episode is more homoerotic than poly hell

While the transition to being stranded was very hurried, and the call outs to lord of the flies and the shining were certainly on the nose. I very much enjoyed this story. The moment at the end when they were discussing having something or someone to live for, as well as when they saw the woman with her family did get to me a bit.

Ready to start my week at work with these goofs

3 hour dirty talk ep when

have to say it as a local, it's not Bue-canon, it's Buck-anon, VA has a ton of weirdly pronounced places . like Buena Vista, which is pronounced Bue-nah Vis-tah

Post 12 of asking that I would really love to see yalls spin on reading "I'm a Guard Stationed at a secret government prison" https://www.reddit.com/r/nosleep/comments/cr0lna/im_a_guard_stationed_at_a_secret_government/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=mweb3x&utm_name=mweb3xcss&utm_term=1&utm_content=share_button

If the sentinels don’t have plumed helmets I call BS! Or the Sentries

This one was such a banger

You guys should play look outside on a live one day in the future I think the meat man would appreciate the eldritch body horror and lips would like the story Peak cast as always

Of course Walker added a guns and roses reference lmao 😂

Washington resident here… it’s pronounced (Spo-Can) not (Spo-Cain) I’m losing my mind listening to them butcher its name.

Hearing Isaiah comments on Sai King makes me wonder about how he would fare with The Dark Tower and all involved stories.

Happy Appy and Lips go together like Happy Appy and Lips

I am once again asking you boys to read the following stories: At the Patio Door Dr. Black A Favor for a Favor Secret Bar I really enjoyed this one, the tension was pretty well built up this time. C.K. is usually a hit or miss but this was a dinger for sure!

So true! I think they are probably ideas that would be conveyed great if they had more time to breathe and kind of be examined in the light, so to speak. I feel like some visual artists/(maybe just people in general) have a way of talking sometimes that resembles how eyes gather information rather than the way ears do ya know

By the end of the story it feels like actually nothing happened, there were a couple good moments but overall nothing happened, no ones story got complete, this is essentially the account of the donner party but reskined Also when acker pulled out the fucking milkyways at the end i had the same reaction hunter did near the end of happy appy with the followers bit

1:04:43 WENDIGOON ATTACK ON TITAN VIDEO WHEN???????????

Kind of hoped the entire stuck in whitefall part was a dream the mc had before arriving in Spokane. Thought it was going there from mc sleeping through minneapolis. Dream scenario could've set up more fears and hopes of being a father and creepy premonition shit but idk

CK Walker is 2/5 in CreepCast stories Edit #1 So, far this story is good. 3/6. As a baseball fan she’s batting a .500 Edit #2 Yeah, I’m sorry but we gotta stop stroking authors on this podcast, I know we like some, but most if not all of the authors people praise here are one hit wonders or word soup writers, and some are vastly overrated. This story fails on so many fundamental levels, I like the premise, but the execution is bad. I hate to be “that” guy complaining, but I have an opinion and an asshole, so I’m entitled to my shitty opinion. frankly, this story wasn’t all that good, the bite of the story failed and you don’t get pay off till the end. Her stories either start wonderful, and have a terrible ending, or it’s the opposite.

Would’ve also been great if Acker burned his ticket half-mindedly to use as fuel to continue cooking people for consumption.

Weird gripe as someone who likes cannibalism in horror. I hate moralized "oh, as the good humane protagonist, I'm not eating people." Weak sauce. Boring. Also, they're underestimating starved body nutrition.. Organs are still good I'm pretty sure regardless of how starved you are. Don't ever just eat flesh. Prion disease smh. Also, having taken greyhoynd--100% people to tribalize that fast at stations during mundane normal stuff. Let alone a storm. Greyhound broke down and we all had places to be. Better be sure some of us formed groups immediately and like planned how to get the Frick out rather than wait 12 hours in the middle of nowhere. Was actually pretty memorable. I'd crashed my car so that's why I was taking greyhound. Had s concussion and it was fun. Had plenty of conversations with strangers and got called a dirty Hispanic by a guy because I spoke enough Spanish to help translate the time/instructions to the immigrants. Like he was like "are there no white English speaking god dang Americans on this bus." I was all 3, just could speak a toddlers Spanish level. Also I relate to the def met a runaway girl, but she was going sonrwhrre better. she kinda used me as a shield from creeps. No, I could not fight to save my life or even argue, but I was a guy, and you'd be surprised how creeps really get deterred by "other person present." Anyway, CK Walker suffers from the curse of millennial gal author writing men. Where it feels Stephen King inspired, but she don't really ever let any of her protagonists be proper grey. They can have vices and make mistakes, but they can't ever be shitty. Which I hate. If you're gonna be realistic/grounded, nah, I need these men in these stories to be a little less "constant Marvel esque hero."

Hunters grandpa in the chair with the rifle would go hard as an action figure

Nah bro you were the ONLY ONE playing gay chicken 😭😭😭

Spokane reference⁉️

51:15 Is that you Flashgitz Don?

mac and me flashing 😭

i pay this patreon subscription give me the dr who fan fiction

idk how there can be so many good moments but it’s also kinda bad

Was the meth creep biting the MC just a misdirect, or a foreshadow to the cannibalism?

Kind of slow, but all in all I enjoyed this story.

Such a good story but I think that they could’ve spent a little bit more time fleshing out the main characters relationship with Mel and then they could’ve cut down most of the bus ride

SPOILERS: Honestly the entirety of Whitefall being a purgatory, really feels like a cop out. The only real character development that could be rewarded was Chris’. But even still, there wasn’t enough sustenance to his backstory for there to be a satisfying pay off for him making it out (by eating human flesh?). I get Isaiah’s point of you have to fully let go of your humanity to pass through, but chris’ only flaw in this story was leaving his girlfriend because they were having issue. But the second she said she was pregnant he was literally right back in and did the right thing. Far before ever reaching white fall. I like hunters idea a little more. How everyone is just a projection of different people in time lines skewed from Chris’ decision. But I think if CK Walker wanted that, she would have drawn some better parallels. CK Walker does a great job of building up these emotional scenes but I think fails to deliver on the horror elements. Still is a great episode. I really liked the FNAF sound effect when they mentioned Freddie’s. W editor

Just a heads up: if the location is even a little bit a part of the PNW… just look up the pronunciation. Please. Theres an 85% chance you are pronouncing it wrong

Here’s my thoughts: when Stiker got bit by the methhead, only then did we start finding out the names of people. Prior to that everyone, including the narrator, was not named. They were referred to as some trait (ie scraggly, weary traveler, runaway.) Also after he got bit, they said that he had fallen asleep for some time. After that point was when every character became immediately known as their full name, not just a random person described by an outstanding characteristic. I think that when Striker got bit, he went into a hallucinogenic dream state, in which all the characters represented ideas that he had been struggling with. Mack, the first character who was initially an antagonist, became someone that Stike could not only relate to, but also use as an example of what he himself could have become (a man who abandoned his unborn child.)

I really want to like CK Walker’s work more, I really do, but it is getting to a point where her track record is the complete opposite to what the boys describe. She’s able to come up with interesting concepts (childhood stories with a gruesome reality, a storm causing normal people to devolve into tribal mentality, etc.) but just can’t seem to land her punches. Mayhem Mountain is easily her best work simply because it’s so short and snappy but when it comes to longer pieces it always falls apart. The primary thing I’ve noticed is something Isaiah pointed out: she writes in the most stereotypically “millennial” style ever, an insult I don’t even like using. Every single character is overly witty and always has some smart remark to make. Having one character like that is fine. ALL OF THEM? It becomes obnoxious. She also writes with the subtlety of a freight train. From the “and everyone clapped” segment of this story to the ridiculous level of evil humans, her online stories just can’t have any complexity aside from “good and evil.” Which is fine on its own, but once again, not all the time. Something more specific to this story, however, is just how juvenile the writing is. From the constant “fucks” to the RIDICULOUS amount of repetition. Like how many times is she going to bring up the father smoking with the kid or character’s saying “my girl.” I’m hoping this is just one of her earlier stories because that’s the only way I can see those little blips happening. But again, this story does have a very interesting premise much like her others so hopefully future stories they read from her will land those hits correctly.

50:21 oh we GOTTA kill this guy

It’s a published novel but even if it’s not for the show I HIGHLY recommend “A Short Stay in Hell” by Steven L. Peck. The vending machine thing hit me like a truck because of it

Dude I would sue the pants off this place

This reminds me of something that happens in the Metro 2033 books, been a while since I read them. But in the back of my head i think i remember this being almost the reason the main character leaves his section of the metro behind or something if i recall correctly

Seeing Kermit go was the saddest part of this story

yay 3 hours long!!!!

As a Minnesotan, your guys' pronunciation of "Minneapolis" is, frankly, insulting. I would like an apology.

I really like hunter's suggestion of Acker not having his ticket at the end. You could even make it so, in some speech to win others over, he says we're trapped here and throws it into the one of the fires as a symbolic gesture to get on board with his ideas

As an undefeated Gay Chicken champion... there is no timeouts to gay chicken. Marriage is a strat now.

You could heavily fix the middle part of this story (without having to drag it out word count wise) by just having ONE person acting super defensive of a vending machine at day 3 (make it Acker to be even stronger). Everyone thinks theyre a freak and way overreacting at that point and disregards him and lets him defend his little machine. Then as days turn to weeks his bus mates start seeing he was right all along and form the first tribe, seeing their success, the others soon follow suit. You wouldnt have to add or even change much and it would make it far more believable. As the story currently stands, nearly everyone is acting like some savage freak by day 3 and its so unbelievable

41:38 Spokane and Post Falls are basically the same place lol. My bear trap is that this will be a huge factor later on in the story. (Source: I live there)

Guns n roses reference right off the bat

Ily daddy Hunter

Omg right in the heart

10:11 OHIO MENTION

Hunter telling Isaiah, "Shinji is literally you" while Shinji is the #1 little bitch in anime history 😂

I will say that with my intro to Whitefall being the Nosleep pod, the voice acting did make a difference in my interpretation of the characters but rereading it also gave some fun theories and insight to the overall theme. In general I agree with the Catholic purgatory symbolism. Still a close second for favorite CK Walker stories despite the plot holes

good story! only gripe with this episode is the meth guy is not gracie’s boyfriend. he’s some random creep

the kermit voice fucked me up i was HOWLING. but i found this episode really funny on other merits too. like how it'd been like 50 hours when people started to group up. i didn't like the story very much but it was a great listening experience lmao. complicated feelings on ck walker nation rise up

Yooooo I live in spokane. Really connected with this one. I appreciate you guys ive been listening with to yall for a bit now through sone of the hardest times in my life. Kept me smiling. Yall are awesome.

I love all these comments that are from people who never even got to Whitefall.

Someone had died before they broke the employee door down…

Why'd they have to keep calling them Polack the whole time lol

I need a “Stuff” counter. They say stuff a lot.

Screaming SPOKE-ANN it’s SPOKE-ANN

Please add all of your videos from before Patreon to the account so I don’t have to sit through ads when I rewatch

Newish listener so maybe I’m off, but it seems like Hunter’s ideas can use a little more unpacking, but Isaiah is too in his own head to pick up on it. I wish there was a little more engagement from Isaiah in what Hunter is thinking more often! I think it would benefit the nuance of what Hunter is getting at, I feel like a lot of times you guys hit some good analysis and then walk away too fast.

The Kermit bit was so funny. I was laughing my ass off sad to see him leave when he went to get McDonalds

I think CK Walker has used up her good faith at this point. She can't write villains and she can't write endings. Probably time to call it quits on her stories. I can't remember the last time she didn't disappoint.

I think CK Walker is an amazing writer who seems to like to write boring stories lmao. Her characters are GREAT I just wish the plots they find themselves in were also

Why did Hunter just make Dillon’s voice a Down’s syndrome man

"mini-an-apple-las?" is this how deeply happy appy has seeped into your brains? he's a truly an incognito hazard.

4-5 days and I'm walking out. Taking my chances

That moment with Mack was honestly the best part, the character arc was immaculate.

17:33 woke the fnaf freak sleeper agent in me

The way I would barricade the door as soon as they went in there

Isaiah, you’ve gotta drop the Doctor Who fic to the Patreon now. Also if it makes you feel better, I had a bit of an iPad kid phase when I was 11 where I would watch the Van Gogh episode and the Wedding of River Song on loop that I genuinely don’t know how I wasn’t diagnosed with ADHD until I was an adult. And I can’t believe I’m admitting this on the internet, but I had a shrine to Eleven behind my bedroom door and ran around in a tweed jacket

After this, borrasca 5, and deep woods can we please agree to never ever read a ck walker story ever again 😭

1 hour in and I gotta say absolutely nothing has happened in my scary story podcast

Jackson Po-lack is one of my favorite artists, despite his derogatory and insulting name

Its just occurred to me that CK Walker writes like an amateur Stphen King in her stories like this. A significant reliance on tropes with a wide cast of characters and a premise that begins mystical but slowly unfolds to be more bombastic

So happy it didn't become a weird sex thing

As someone who grew up in Spokane Washington and escaped it as a young adult it is WILD to hear about someone fighting this hard to get there

Why does hunter keep calling the creepy guy that they booted off the bus for harrassing gracie her “boyfriend”😭 am i missing something

This moronic mc deserves to die like "hmmm gimmie a sign not to go" his girl shows up AND is pregnant and hes like ..................... SO im gonna go :D

The green mile is like the opposite of a novella (unless you count each part as separate books... Then it's a bunch of novellas...) it's a pretty long book all together.

Isaiah talking on the phone at the end is far funnier than it should be

I’m surprised you guys liked the second half of this story as much as you did. I was getting major Borrasca 5 energy from it. Not to that level of cheese/cringe, but it was getting closer as it went on until the very end imo. I thought the first half was way stronger than the second half. CK Walker has a gift when writing very good interpersonal dialogue but I feel she struggles at the end of stories when it’s time to confront the villain and then it gets more cliche. That’s kind of been how it’s happened with ever one of her stories we’ve heard on this show since OG Borrasca

Weird how all the more recent CK walker stories they read starts out great and then it becomes mid halfway thru the story.

My favorite thing is all the character names that were just like vague descriptors. It reminded me of the community names for No I'm Not A Human characters

"Spo-Cain"

they better get used to the romantic dialogue if they wanna read more yaoi on stream

Ending had me pissed, got me again with the good stuff boys

A real stinker gotta say it

I cannot believe this story has such mediocre parts while also having some of the best written moments we've had on the show.

skip the attack on titan rec. watch the mexican office <3

Still waiting for the my friend has been living in an alternate reality episode

My greyhound ticket costed 120 for Laramie WY to a southwestern MT town, NOT $40, also story is set in the past

I'm an alpha Kris!

Pogging whenever I hear Indiana mentioned

I was laughing my ass off every time Kris called Mel 😂😂

I'm glad the boys enjoyed the story, but I think CK Walker's rep on the show is blown way out of proportion to the actual quality of the writing. I enjoy Borrasca & Deepwoods part 1 well enough, but everything else has been so mediocre or outright terrible. "Millennial and Marvel-esque" is a good description. None of the horror or character drama had any weight to me, I felt stunned by how fast it went from 0 to 100 and back to 0 again with no apparent internal logic to make it flow together. Just a big "Wouldn't that be weird??? Erm, yeah, it KINDA would...." Love the show, that Kermit bit had me smiling and giggling at work lol

Up coming fall of the house of usher? I’m sure that came out a yea for two ago no?

FINALLYYYYYY!!! IVE BEEN BEGGING FOR THIS ONE!

CK Walker: great at ideas and beginnings, mediocre at middles, hit or miss (mostly miss) on endings. Definitely better at shorter stories. ETA: I feel like every ck Walker story they've red except Borrasca has more or less followed the same pattern. Talking about how great CK is, followed by liking the setup of the story, followed by slowly losing a bit of patience with the story and talking about tangents more and more , followed by more or less reluctantly saying it was a good/decent story (except deepwoods pt 2) with many caveats. I don't honestly know if I'd consider walker as mt Rushmore material imho. Much better than the average prolific pasta writer, and clearly has the skills to be a writer for scripts etc, but I feel the pastas shes written are more first draft material than fully finished stories.

The beginning was excellent in the writing and how natural it felt like usual from CK Walker. Had a bit of the cringe dialogue I'm not a big fan of but still good, the middle was definitely the worst but nothing like completely unbearable just wish it was built up better but that ending completely made up for it because that shit was top tier, very glad to have another CK banger. Hope to hear My Property Isn't Normal sometime in the future

Halfway through this episode and I'm sorry to say: CK Walker, you're more of an Ideas Woman to me than an Execution Woman.

Day 49 of asking for "The Supermarket Monster".

Y

Oh God, another CK Walker story I don’t know if I can handle the sheer mediocrity

From watching the Papa Meat Puppet show to this…pretty good Sunday…pretty good

during the aot section I was fully nodding along. stan ck walker an pls read rainbow factory

Why does thumbnail Isaiah look like he has six fingers on his right hand.

thats what a $20 bus trip gets you

was weird hearing my state mentioned finally in a story

Post another play through of “No, I’m not human” or I’m gunna play gay chicken with your dad

Another banger, cried

ND MENTIONED

I LIVE IN SPOKANE WA DON'T COME HERE

People who make fanart of Hunter and Isaiah are going to get SOOOO much audio content from this episode I stg

Has anyone recommended “My Friend Has Been Living In An Alternate Reality”? I remember that story being a banger

The pronunciation of Spokane killed me lol. It’s spoke-can 🥲

I always enjoy the book recs. Been getting more into horror books. First one I got was Stolen Tongues then branched out to others like Between Two Fires and Red Rabbit. Definitely recommend those too.

Happy Easter everyone! He is risen!

I can't decide if I like hearing stories by CK Walker or not

So bought in at the start and the latter third made it worthwhile for me but the middle was quite jarring. The fast outward hostility/ mental breakdown could be justified with the situation’s stressors but it just didn’t quite mesh or feel earned. I think if there was a bit more uncanniness blended in throughout the start of their time in the bus stop, and then the campy hostility could all start 1 week later, would really enhance it. Maybe she could do more with the exit like Hunter mentioned, like a group sending someone out and having something mysterious but plausibly explainable happen; maybe they come back in an hour and feel like they were wandering for days, and/or saw an uncanny town with slightly unnatural looking buildings, all closed but with shadows in the windows watching. I do think it works very well that nothing is too obviously supernatural to the characters; something is clearly off and unnatural but it’s all within the realm of ordinary material experience at least on the surface.

went to an anime convention this weekend, i witnessed a dude with a dad bod, longer hair, hawaiian button up and a beard get mistaken for cosplaying as wendigoon. turns out that's just his vibe 😭🤣

I feel like u can have the idea hunter had about ackner being left behind and chris has his backpack Rummages through it and finds the candy har

The boys getting hot and bothered in this one

100% would buy the windi teeth lip pic shirt lol

Im imagining Whitefall terminal being like a long nightmare. It would explain why the characters dont look terrifying on the bus or at their stops because everything that happened wasn't real

Cincinnati is a great place to creep my cast.

Absolutely favorite

Spo-Kane lol

U guys say spokane funny it's like spoke-can not spokane

Legit one of my favorites, the RELATIONSHIPS, the htting deaths, of the baby, the nurse, and the fire all hit me moreso than other things. Maybe disregarding the not-real ending, the RELATIONSHIPS.

You guys think he got ptsd when he saw the Big Mac on the McDonald menu?

I’m only just getting started but the character archetypes are strong here. Runaway is the oracle, weary seems like the shadow/mirror self. Lanky and Scraggle it’s too early to tell for where I am. Really interesting. Makes the Odyssey comment track more.

What if the father daughter thing : it was the fathers idea to give them the boy instead of the women ....so she was like it was your idea....OR she didn't want her dad to live without herOR like the father said he'd give them 2 .....or not

I live in spokane!

This is basically the South Park blizzard episode

Why will Isaiah say "God" but not "Jesus"?

Wendi PLEASE do a deep dive video on Attack on Titan. I’m literally my knees BEGGING you!!! PLEASE!!

Creeping my cast here in Washington State xD

this might be the hardest i've ever fallen off a story mid way....... i was loving it right until the snow started. literally would have been happier if the bus driver was a Mummy in disguise or something

What the fuck is this complete shit story? I can't believe C.K. Walker has the positive reputation she has. This story made no sense, there was no sense of dread, no horror, no lasting impressions, the gore was completely unnecessary and badly written too. Nothing got me here, even the tear-jerkers were weak.

Story kind of reminds me of the show "FROM" but doesn't have the same hook and intensity unfortunately

Please read the fan fiction about vango

SNOW STORY, LETS FUCKING GO!!!!!

CK Walker sucks my ass

Completely unrealistic request; All of the My Name is Lily Madwhip series.

i did not expect a spokane jump scare this week but here we are (my homophobic family is from there so that’s why it’s a jump scare for me lol)

Yo Spokane mentioned?

Common Attack on Titan W

I listened to this story a few years back on NoSleep podcast. Made me cry then. Ready to cry about it again

Hell yeah

It's confirmed Isaiah is a gay chicken.

Story said this was before cell phones existed. $25 for a bus ticket back then was probably expensive af lol

WAIT ISAIAH IS SAYING MINNEAPOLIS?! LMAOOOO

Hell, yeah, three hours!

I like the idea of baby wendigoon crying as he writes the last sentence of the van gogh doctor who fan fic

I hate how you guys pronounce Minneapolis 😂 “Mini-indianapolis”

Im 2 hours in and it dawned on me when the line says “we hear from the PA once a month” when he was first on the phone with his girl friends she said “it’s only a couple months” and he corrected her saying weeks not months, did she know?

Hunter finally said I love you

At the point where hunter references infinite Ikea but the story is more similar to scp 4076, an hour long video tape of a basketball game where every re watch causes the people in the video to become more aware that they're in a video tape. Highly recommend everyone checking it out

Just say “fuck”

“Spocaine”

Hey guys, I think you would really like the Novel Tender Is The Flesh by Augustina Bazterrica. It's not very long and since yall have been doing longer vids, maybe it may fit in. It's a crazy read and I think you'd like it. I read it when looking for more authors of color. I will keep commenting this everywhere until you acknowledge it!

Only 12 mins in… as someone from North Dakota this shit can’t be good. Don’t go there y’all it’s awful.

Holy shit we found out Don Gregor is on the bus at 51:02

Nice balls, Mr. Goon

These two should stop being so coy and just fucking kiss already

Of course wendigoon loves attack on titan, basic

We need Isaiah to do an evangelion video

Running away to billings montana is wild. Its almost the worst city in the state 💀

3 HOURSSSS

WE NEED A READ OF THE DOCTOR WHO FANFIC NOWWWWWWWW

Happy Easter Requesting my property isn’t normal Please 🙏

Wonder if lips hates the attack on titan ending as much I do

creep cast

The mispronouncation of spokane fucked with me lol other then that great story

Love the sensual back and forth between the guys very cool 😎

I've been waiting for this episode for years

Oh, the shippers are going to have a field day around an hour in...

I need more of Hunter's Kermit voice 😂 "I'll skin your asshole raw" has me DYING

This is my first episode drop as a patron!!! Idk if yall know me from the subreddit, Im the Billings MT guy who makes sculptures 😎 I’m super excited to be a supporter 😝

Happy Easter fam! We're eating good tonight with this 3 hr episode :p

YIPPIE cant wait to cast this during Easter dinner for the whole fam to watch

Can't believe Spokane has given us Sydney Sweeney and Whitefall

$42 for a ticket makes sense if they're using payphones. Things were much cheaper. Payphones still exist today, but they are not as common. Plus no one is mentioned using a cellphone on a long train ride? thinking late 90s early 2000s.

Spo-Can not cane

CRYING NOT SPOKANE LMAO From a patreon Currently living and listening in Spokane Also it is the pronunciation of spo-can 🥫 not cane 🫡

eating on mic = straight to jail

Post falls and Spokane are neighbors- maybe 30-40 min drive from city center to city center

Who the hell would have a better life in spokane

W for the employed

Let’s gooo 3 hours long the rest of my shift about to blow by

Uh oh C.K walker

I hardly ever read at all until I started watching creepcast. Now I have penpal, strange accounts and two other books. I'm going to have to get this one. It brought the joy of reading back into my life and I just wanted to let you guys know that and thank you for that!

WOOHOOO WHITEFALL LET'S GOOOO!!! It was my first exposure to C.K. Walker listening to NoSleepPod on a long road-trip, and it's been an all-time favorite ever since. Stupidly happy to see it on CreepCast, can't wait to hear what the boiz think of it

Restock or get new merch pretty please

17:30 ⚠️JUMPSCARE WARNING⚠️ 17:30

The nightmare blunt rotation of a mt Rushmore haha

The scariest part is their pronunciation of Spokane

Bring poor happens lol and it takes 9 months to grow a baby. I'm gonna tell ya'll, I got surprise pregnant 5 years ago during fn covid. It was terrifying in every way and we were beyond broke. Idk how but the baby gave us the motivation to fight our way out of poverty. Fast too. We cared more about a baby than ourselves and we were exhausted. Our baby never went without anything when a year earlier we didn't even eat every day lol. Now we have 2 kids and they are fn spoiled and we make more than we ever have.

I just saw a Margret in a jar filled with a mysterious liquid on reddit🤢

HAPPY SUNDAY YALL!!!! 😄😄😄😄💚💚🖤🖤🖤🖤💚💚🖤🖤 and Happy Easter!!!!!! 🫶🫶🫶🫶

This really creeps my cast floppy