Devlog# 16: Any Wishes for the Game? 👀
Hey friends,
I'm currently planning future chapters and I thought, wait, why am I doing this alone right now? 🤔
This feels like a good moment to ask the best community in the world (YOU) what kind of content you'd like to see more of.
This can be anything really.
More spicy moments, more group chat chaos, more characters, more events, more pictures, or anything else that comes to mind. Feel free to also share things you think could be improved in earlier chapters.
Don't be shy about it. I really want to know what you personally enjoy and what you'd be excited to see happening in the game.🙂↕️
The only rule is: please keep suggestions within Patreon ToS and nothing illegal. 😅 Besides that, feel free to share your thoughts openly!
I can't promise that every idea will make it into the game of course. I do have a vision for the game after all. But reading your wishes helps me a lot when deciding what to focus on next. And who knows, maybe you'll even find your idea in one of the next updates 👀
Can't wait to see what you guys come up with!
Your Donut
Comments (80)
IDK about others but I love chastity cuck content. Would be awesome to see something like that maybe?
it will be great to have is more picture of Mina and in lingerie and to see full body of the characters in the pictures. and to see Mina have a strong personality and is capable to decide to stop NTS/NTR because she feels distracted from the MC and want to reconnect with him so she decide to take a break only to be with the MC
It would be great to have more pictures of Mina in lingerie, and to see her full-length. Mina has a strong personality and is capable of ending her relationship with the protagonist because she feels distracted and take away from the MC and wants to reconnect with him. She therefore decides to take a break to refocus on the MC.
A date with Alex to make good on promises made over the phone, or a meeting with Nora—the next stage of a serious relationship.
More feet stuff, Nora cosplay, and Mina gangbang (with or without Nora and Alex), and multiple male threesomes for Mina
I feel like we should convince nora to help embrace sam along with alex
Girls meet with an old music video producer, who offers them a video for a favour
can anyone tell me how to play it?
I played it on lewdspot.
Have Alex keep flirting and teasing Nora. Maybe Nora will give in after a while and those 2 can share a shower together like Alex offered.
i can't wait to finally see nora showing more of her body, and maby the strapon scene with nora and alex, or a threesome with all three girls
Here's a scenario for ya! A competition between all males involved in the story so far, that involve... DONUTS! Specifically who can stack the most donuts on their... enthusiasm for the girls. The winner gets to feed the ladies. Consolation price for the one who can't stack a single donut, because the donuts tears apart immediately...
More cuckolding, small dick beta male humiliation from Mina and Jacob, Mina being corrupted and having sex without MC’s permission, creampie clean up, wallpaper acknowledgement
More pictures
With more voyeuristic perspectives added, some of Mina and Jacob's actions can only be learned from social media.
MC sex with all three girls. Mina sex with Sam and others. Nude photoshoot with Nora ASAP
Longer updates. My wish for the game is that we start seeing the MC get some action with the other girls like Nora, Alex, and some others for those of us who chose that the MC can be intimate with other girls as well.
Would like to see the MC getting a Name! OnlyFans from Nora
Personally not a fan of the humiliation play, so more mutually-agreed sharing is good! Or even a threesome between the MC, Mina, and Jacob. I would like to see the MC get with Alexis and/or Nora too
Sry...D, here we go.: What if the girls started reacting to how the MC treats the other girls? Time spent with Alex could make Mina jealous. Focusing too much on Nora could hurt Alex's route. Not because anyone is evil, but because relationships don't exist in a vacuum. Suddenly every choice has a cost and every route becomes a real choice. thats shortened, gpt had taken a lot out, thats the " basic module".
More daddy action where he controls it
Like that he has a big dick and isn’t being cucked is inst ad an active participant who just enjoys slurring his lady out
More Mina adventures, Nora becomes dom behind closed doors
Risky sex, pregnancy sex, her becoming a total creampie lover, more random men meet ups, just her basically becoming a cock slut.
Definitely creampie cleanup from both of the two main girls. Some small penis humiliation from them too would be fucking hot.
Don't end game 👻
As per where the game is heading - Mina takes Jacob bare. This becomes a regular thing. MC also gets to fuck Alex and Nora. MC falls hard for Nora creating "interesting" tensions
I love this, would be awesome if MC gets a chance with Nora and Mina will hear about it
For Mina; Creampie, multiple guys, DP, bbc (Sam), gloryhole, pregnancy risk. Seen a few others here that sound like good as options as well. Option to only allow Jacob or others to hit it raw and other things that she hasn't done with MC. Tattoos maybe 👀
definitely more teasing, images, feet content. Unexpexted situations can be good too. Also the wallpaper thing was good too. Yeah i would for sure love the suprise element.
i would like some beta male humiliation pussy free and maybe let us pick our dick size realy small would be nice
Need some action with Alex 😭
I would love if Mina would ask what kind of photos to publish online and you could guide her to more revealing or not
More female protagonists act like sweet little darlings, flirting with the MC😍 and showing him their more exciting sexual techniques, such as anal sex, 3P, 4P, simultaneous oral sex, intercourse, and anal sex, constantly ask MC if he'd be happy seeing her do these things. Is she his good honey/good girlfriend?😍she share photos of she and MC French kissing in group chats, after female protagonists have performed oral sex on others/drunk others' cum/cheat him with others.😍 Will there be built-in Chinese language support in the future? I need to use translation software frequently, which is very troublesome.😣
Replay mechanic, for every chapter so players can find or discover different pictures, without them having to restart from the beginning.
1. Mina has her own ideas and is willing to seek excitement on her own, rather than just following orders. Sometimes the protagonist can only obtain information through a third party, such as social media, Jacob or the girls, making the protagonist feel on the verge of losing control. 2. cumwalk or some very bold things that have never been done with the protagonist
Can u add more characters which interact with mina and plz make update longer
Creampie, pregnancy risk, breeding play even if it doesn’t lead to immediate breeding, eventual endgame breeding
Vídeos ?
Alex and Mina get wild at a bar after.a show and share a BBC
Excellent idea
And I think it would be interesting if there were one or two more encounters between Mina and Jacob in the bedroom, in addition to Mina's fun and intimate moments with her boyfriend(MC). I also think it would be cool to have more interactions and images of Nora and Alex with the MC, maybe finally some moments where he sleeps with one of them.
She's only been with one other guy. Add in five or six more before anything else: creampies, anal, DP, BBC, gangbang and a hot strapon scene with Alex
I would love to see lesbian stuff between Mina with other ladies including nora and Alex I know it would be very good and hot
Oh. Wait. Wait wait wait. 🤯
I enjoy when the MC is shown some love and gets to have fun like the FMC. Humiliation ruins it for me bc Im not a cuck lol.
I think we could use more spicy scenes, maybe Jacob dominating the main character and bragging about what he's doing to our heroine, or meeting Mina's friends and bragging about what we're going to do with them and expanding our relationships with them. Finally, new male characters, a friend of Jacob's, a neighbor of the main characters, or a boss to play with.
I am not against any of what has been suggested, (except the more extreme things that don't align with Mina and the mutually loving relationship she has with the MC), long as it makes sense. For example Mina just doesn't strike me as a glory hole type of girl, she would want to know who's cock she is sucking. As far as the threesome goes, I am all for that as long as it isn't rushed, it feels natural, and there is a version where the male protagonist can participate. Finally, there are two approaches I thoroughly enjoy in the infidelity narratives that so rarely get fleshed out. The first one only seems to happen with the NTR stories: Angst. The partner (Mina in this case) makes a mistake or gets 'caught up in the moment' and violates an agreed upon boundary or rule between herself and the MC. She feels guilty and is scared of the MC leaving her because of her indiscretion and feels like she must tell him what happened and beg him for forgiveness. This can open up other paths of redemption - Mina could allow the MC to be with other characters as a lead in to a 'cuckqueen' route with Alex and Nora. Or it could lead to the MC being in more control of Mina's actions for a chapter or two... nothing too degrading but enough that Mina is 'put in her place' and fully grasps the error of her ways. It could also have a variation where he directs Mina to go to Jacob or Sam or both and get them all sexually aroused and commands her to stop just before they go all the way and Mina returns to him as a message to Jacob and Sam of who is really in control and, ultimately who Mina loves and will always come back to in the end. It maintains the relationship dynamic while offering Mina a way to prove she is only in love with the MC and truly sorry for her previous indiscretions. You could offer a choice to the reader to allow Jacob and/or Sam to go all the way with Mina but only with understanding that the MC is calling the shots, and he will get to reclaim Mina afterwards with instructions to tell Jacob and/or Sam that they are only flings and it is the MC she truly loves and their trysts are just temporary fun. I believe this would satisfy the 'gooners' as well as the readers looking for a bit more depth to the character development. The other side of it is the development of more between Mina, Nora, and Alex...not necessarily cutting out Jacob or Sam (or others) but it could lead to a 'harem by proxy' for the MC. He directs the corruption and calls the shots. One example would be a group scene where either the MC is involved and directs the action or he is there watching only getting to be involved on a smaller scale. Just some thoughts. 🙂
I thought the way you explained it was simply great, very good.
I want MC to meet Jacob and have threesomes with Mina with creampies, sloppy seconds and cum eating clean up with MC and Jacob encouraging each other. Would love for them to become really close, like MC asking Jacob to cum inside, even caressing Jacob's ass holding him on Mina as he cums deep inside. Then MC licks and swallows any cum dribbling out and cleans Jacob's cock before fucking and cumming inside her himself. Also double penetration with Jacob would be awesome. Personally would love an optional bi route with Jacob like kissing, cock sucking, Jacob breeding MC (or vice versa) but my hopes are probably too high. Anyway I'm still loving the game! More Jacob please and more texting between Jacob and MC discussing what they going to do together with player choices for what they do!
Probably Mina just doing now that she's gotten permission in one route. And Netflix with Sam time, that's overdue. Maybe Mina showing reservations or acting out with someone else (guy from work?) when the MC has a fling with one of the other girls?
I would say keep the choices coming with the MC having control with the sharing. I have loved the recent chapters where the MC has the agency. As far as future events, maybe threesome scenario, either MMF of FFM where the MC is involved.
what if we got Mina to get a threesome with the two guys?? I think that would be so hot to see Mina's usual fling and then maybe Sam involved too??? Getting those messages would be so cool to see
Chossing the outfit , encouraging Nora to lose her virginity to another man, the possibility of making others go raw and you with a condom only. Are some of my ideas as long consent Is explicit or implied It Is all ok
Add guilt and doubt for the female lead.
This is exactly what so many of these infidelity narratives are missing, especially if you are writing about a couple that is in love and respects one another. None of what Mina is doing should be taken lightly and it should be examined through the lens of her love for the MC. It should make her worry about possibly straying too far from the foundational love of her relationship with the MC. There should always be opportunities to pull back and take a breather and take stock of what each choice means for everyone involved. Of course most readers are looking for a quick fap so this is why you rarely see anything like this in an infidelity story. 🫤
I really like light/teasing/playful humiliation and domination from the girls as well as many perverted things as possible. I would love to see more of a focus in that direction. Light/teasing humiliation and domination could be stuff like girls telling MC to kiss their butts, face sitting, spit, urination. Cum clean up scenes would also be great too. I'd say take a look at No nuT iSekai by Chibi Mage for some inspiration, its at very early stages but is hitting super hard already, at least for me. Not much to say, don't have an imagination, but I love what you're creating, so keep at it and thank you.
Creampie , cleanup, pegging and maybe chastity..humiliation route if possible..
Perhaps some swapping which turns into group with Mina,Sam,Alex and jacob. And slowly they work towards getting Nora in. I remember in one message that Sam showed interest in Mina and talked about Nora could be a "wild girl" to sleep with should work on that even more so since they swapping rooms going back and forth. More naked s*x scenes in particular with Mina and others. Additionally add a sister of the three or MC into the mix to spice things up lots of possibilities.... WOW i really have been thinking about this
First off great job and my suggestions should not invalidate anything you've already done. As you've stated you're not including an NTR route to the game and thank you for clarifying. I really thought you were setting things up for that possibility with character flags and certain choices. That said I really would like those NTRish pockets explored more and maybe that can be done through more roleplay choices where Mina takes you on a little adventure. The first roleplay was great and I really like the options to have MC ask Mina for comparison of their sex life with her's and Jacob's. I also like the options to put decisions into Mina's hands cause I don't like telling a partner what to do. Obviously per my pref, I liked the ability to tell Alex I want to see her and the band more with other people and I'm not one to fool around with them myself. So looking forward to where that goes. Also I miss Blue! I really liked exploring MC's preferences in SM and how that might reflect on their specific relationship or his with Mina. Obviously this might be a big writing/route issue. But it would be cool to get an option to join the band on a trip to get more MC interaction for those readers that want that and my gang can have the option to stay home to watch things go even more out of control/spicy when we feel a little left out and regretful we made that decision. But ultimately I love Mina and just want her to be happy exploring the depths of this kink and even if she gets a little out of control and it might cause a fight I ultimately want MC and Mina to come to a common resolution and stay together as that is your intent keeping an NTS story. :) thank you so much if you've made it this far in my ramblings.
Where did i miss clarification about NTR?
Crempie and denial
So from Jacob and Sam? 😏
I need more "girlfriend asking for wallpaper" moments idk why but i found that super hot
More Nora content with the Player. Mina having fun, Nora comes to play. Only fair ya know??
Nora is very interested. 👀
I'd like a route where Mina stops asking for permission and prioritizes hooking up with her bulls over what the MC wants. Also, an ending or route where she stops wanting to have sex with the MC. I also like it when the girls humiliate and make fun of the MC
Fuck you're a cuck
Introduce cutscenes, so you can play with animations. Might even save time from having to show several different renders… plus it just adds to the buildup and climax. As for story, more with Nora… and the MC possibly developing real intimate feelings, like them falling in love. Create a chaotic triangle.
I'd love some more spicy scenes as well as more moments where your wallpaper is acknowledged
Hey!Great game so far! What i wanna see in the game?? In one word: Corruption ;)
Caught me right as I was checking patreon updates. Personally would want more gloryhole content, could also be a way to test flags for more future kink content. Could maybe start as nonexistent app for the player that lets Mina know what gloryholes are nearby when they are at a show or whatever. Just something to ground the concept a little. Another fun option would be posting NSFW content online and allowing some player choice there as well. Also might be fun to add a little more variety in how scenes end by allowing player choice with how her partners finish. Would only be a few more image options for the scene and couple of lines of text but allows for some replayability.
The easy one would be more images i suppose. But i would say I would love to see this game do what few others try (and only a small handful do well) is to have the girls sending short audio clips of their acts. Reeeeally helps build the excitement when you hear them giving head or having sex before you get a chance to see the pics. And on the ntr side it'd be a different kind of intensity when you don't always see what they're doing but you get a short clip of someone hearing whats happening.
I I want a chance at the other girls would really like to have more interaction with Nora
Mina is fully happy and the end of the story - without any regret
I really like how the game is going, the only thing I could complain about is that there are not enough images compared to the text, maybe adding some would be a good idea🤗
I'd like to have more randoms with one or two chances using her than the usual, and quick to get boring, second or third boyfriend dynamics.
Nut cleanup for sure in the back of the club
Mina gets pregnant for the ending of the game
But her idol career! Scandal
